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~The Fairies' Awakening~ (Free Verse) All the fairies begun to rise And from early morning greeted in the sun. Glowing with emeralds and diamonds And amethysts shining so bright Atonished all the elves started to laugh Watching all the sunflowers blooming so high As high as the sky, they seemed to touch the sun And the busy bees that were scouting by Mr and Mrs. Frog sat happily on a lily-pond Staring in amazement to the baby gnomes Playing a tug-a-rope with all the leprachauns As the fairies and butterflies giggled, celebrating Spring. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2002 January,07,2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/8/2015 7:06:00 PM
Dorian, your poem was a very welcome, albeit brief respite from the intense cold in my heat-less home. Thank you for the wonderful images, so full of much-needed warmth!
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Date: 1/8/2015 9:50:00 AM
Those images are absolutely GORGEOUS and enchanting as are you and this sweet poem you have penned! You have such a gentle loving heart my sweet friend! Love and hugs, Jack XXX
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Date: 1/8/2015 9:45:00 AM
So that's what all the commotion was.... A gentle, easy, poem - well done.
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Date: 1/8/2015 5:31:00 AM
May your life become a poem like this blissful one, dear Dorian! Marvelous work! Hugs!
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Date: 1/8/2015 3:20:00 AM
Enchanting, Dorian. Loved it all. Gave me a sweet carefree feeling. Loved the pics as well. Hugs
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Date: 1/7/2015 10:35:00 PM
Dear Dorian: How lovely this dawn light that spurs such lovely feelings. Well done my friend. All the best then, Leon.
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