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The Evil Inside Me

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The Evil Inside Me

I've been nice--and I've been kind
A smile you'll see all the time
No harsh words you'll ever hear
But i'm warning you beware
If you push me to the brink
I won't even stop to think
about the actions I'll display
So you better turn away
Before my bottled up emotions
Cause all kind of bad commotions
There's only so much I can take
Until the point I start to break
Angel wings and halo gone
Replaced by my two devil horns
That will pierce your very soul
When you make me lose control
Of my caring and sweet ways
That I practice every day
Avoiding all the confrontations
Leading to such aggravation
That builds up inside quickly
And there's no where you can be
A burning starts to quickly build
A hot fire and it will
Not decrease until you say
I am sorry for the way
My actions have been rude and mean
Never meant to cause a scene
This message I send to you
I'll be nice if you will too

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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 2:27:00 AM
    I can relate to this so much. When I lose it, I lose it! My Dad would tell people, If u don't want caught in the cross fire, stay outta of her way. lol!

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 5:50:00 PM
    I do like this poem so much. I also can get very angry, but not over small things .I just accept that this is the who I am, and this helps a lot. I, like you will be nice, if the other person meets me halfway. Ell done Robin

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:46:00 AM
    That last line is spot on. Again, totally identified with this. I'm pretty easy-going until you push my buttons, and I have one big red "nuclear" button that when pressed, watch the F out! But I just can't imagine you getting that angry; I see nothing but sweetness in you, but I know we all have our limits. Great write, sweet pea! <3

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 1:12:00 PM
    Thanks for the warning advice. I sure want you on my side in any gutter fight. Great write and it won't stop PSoup from lovin' you.... Jake

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:11:00 PM
    Robin, this poem is a masterpiece! So truthful and relatable!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:18:00 AM
    very well expressed..too well indeed

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 11:06:00 PM
    Robin, very important message, it is awful when nice people have their feelings trampled upon, I'm glad you shared this. Very lovely.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 1:22:00 PM
    I will always be nice. :o) Try not to bottle up to much emotion... R-e-l-e-a-s-e~~~~~ Ha-ha... Very nice. Glad you enjoyed the Kiss with a rush poem.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 6:16:00 AM
    very sweet, Robin! thanks for stopping by! jim