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The Epilogue

From a zygote spark grown such a life she has known, full of prayer and hope. My, how bravely she did cope. Now, she sits and stares entranced by the hairs on the back of her wrinkled hand as the clock on its stand ... ticks. Often, as if in a daze, she'll peer through her haze awakened to the ticking sound, and the earth shifts its ground. Her hair has turned to gray and time just wends its way through the story of a life led that will soon vanish from her head. All those kisses, all the wishes, all the laundry, all the dishes all the memories ... pass like a breeze. Yes, she came to this earth to laugh, to love, to give birth but before she gets away ... was there a point to this play?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 7:17:00 AM
Dear Sue - Such a wonderful write! Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Sue. It is an honor to be listed with you and your wonderful work. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2008 11:39:00 PM
Sue - once again outstanding - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/3/2008 7:38:00 PM
OKAY you are so wonderfull I love everything you write it always makes me either cry or laugh till I can't breath congrades on making it threw first round if it was up to me you would be winner already your friend Nita
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Date: 11/3/2008 3:17:00 PM
BRILLIANT!!!!! Best wishes for the next round. lainie, P.s. Thank you for all your kind comments. Much appreciated.
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Date: 10/28/2008 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations for making it to the semis.
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Date: 10/27/2008 12:09:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery in this poem. Congratulations on making the semi-finals! Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 10/27/2008 5:55:00 AM
Warmest congrats Sue on making it through the first round! Good luck! And don't forget - you are already a winner!!! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:46:00 AM
My congratulations to you, Sue, for your "The Epilogue" making it to the next round, goodluck! Rgds, Ernesto
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Date: 10/27/2008 1:16:00 AM
Congrats on your success in PS contest,best wishes for next round Sue Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my blog
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Date: 9/13/2008 6:25:00 PM
Sue - Outstanding poem - I read your comment on my blog - a couple of our members were using the comment box on their poem as personal sexual e-mails as to reach the top poems list - they would have 60 comments all from one person and all about what they would do to each other on their date and nothing regarding poetry - Thats what the deal was it really got out of hand quickly - God Bless Sue
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Date: 9/3/2008 3:41:00 PM
This is excellent. The piece flows very well. I like the message. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 8/5/2008 1:59:00 AM
left me totally speechless.very well written. what a brainteaser! with much respect and adoration, GiNo,18,Philippines
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Date: 8/4/2008 7:54:00 PM
a very good piece of fine poetry.
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Date: 8/2/2008 7:22:00 PM
Wow!!!! Sue - this blew me away. What powerful images and emotions you have stirred up in this great write. Profound thoughts to ponder here. SENSATIONAL!!! lainie
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Date: 7/4/2008 7:07:00 PM
Very beautiful, but makes one's heart ache. Your purpose was you. You are the purpose, because you know....because you ventured here, lives in one degree or another, have been changed, touched. It's not in vain. Sometimes I feel like that, too, though, even though I am not old, lol. Beautifully written and depthful, Sara
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Date: 6/11/2008 10:11:00 AM
I like the rhyming couplets and the flow of the lines. I can see the images of the hand, hair and ticking clock. There is always a moral to every story which depends on the reader. This is wonderful. Great job! ~ Joseph
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Date: 6/11/2008 8:04:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this heart-touching poem. The imagery is splendid and highly detailed. I really enjoyed! Milt
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Date: 6/11/2008 12:30:00 AM
Fine work Sue..one for my favourites listing.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts
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Date: 6/10/2008 1:46:00 PM
Yes there was a point. Each human being brings something special to the table. Remember "The Old Lamplighter" by the Browns. He made the world a little brighter. Each of us do that in one way or another. God Bless, Sue. Vince
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Date: 6/10/2008 5:38:00 AM
Sue, first off this has excellent flow to it as the rhyme is perfect. The sentiment within does in fact reveal itself to the reader and leavesus thinking about what we do within out lifetime, our purpose. Great effect. Terrific write. Michael
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