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The Enemy

In a field of planted pines newly thinned Neat trees in parallel rows lined up straight Much more visibility once again Cleaned and gleaned open for all to see fate Entered in the open gate to escape But the enemy can see every move A blessing disguised fog came like a drape Covering emotions he can make use of Behind a tree crouched upon the damp ground Coated in fog, heart pounding, holding a scream Waiting for the enemy to hear sounds Of my breathing_or thoughts as they stream Only the thick fog protects as he turns Leaves through the open gate death is now spurned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/4/2013 10:56:00 AM
sad, and deep.......enjoyed............ LOVE* SKAT
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Date: 6/26/2013 9:04:00 PM
Wow, you have outdone yourself with this write my friend! The fog inspired theme is definitely something that I really enjoy! Of course we share a passion for the fog and this poem sure shows this passion with you...and its symbolism! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/26/2013 4:40:00 PM
A wonderful poetic sonnet written in masterful way!
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:14:00 AM
A heart beater for sure. Love, daver
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Date: 6/26/2013 9:48:00 AM
this concept is way different form your usual style and i love the poetic energy you so display... wonderful form, wonderful work, sara... stay well and huggs..:)
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Date: 6/26/2013 9:10:00 AM
hello Sara, how have you been. .. I hope Cody and the family are healing with all the love around. I've been meaning to stop by for some time now... a very deep poem. Please send Doris my love.... Linda
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