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The Dream

Adrift in the coldness of a dream A laughter echoed with shivery Haunting every unredeemed souls Of those who are denied and weary. Echoing yells and constant weeps Those cries are more excruciating Others trapped in a slime head deep Of treachery, lies and self-deceiving. That laughter grow increasingly To every dampen corner faintly lit Eerie eyes on every candle bases Grudgingly watches a soul to slip. Of what could be worst of them all A view from afar of a soul left alone Wondering what it did long before In its eyes, it was me all along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/12/2014 12:12:00 PM
I loved this poem; it reminded me a lot of myself and the way I write. Deep, intriguing, with hints of mystery. Enjoyed this piece very much; job well done. Kudos! :)
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Jonathan Medida
Date: 3/12/2014 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, I am happy you liked it. This encourages me.

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