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The Death of the Muse

She was a pretty muse As far as muses go He said she had about her An incandescent glow There was a certain mischief He saw there in her eyes And though he couldn’t touch her He’d tasted paradise She made his mind to wander Down honeysuckled lanes A few moments with her And he’d forget all his pains She had such rosy lips Cascading raven hair And though he could not touch her He felt her presence there She made him feel euphoric She knew how to beguile Was it the words she spoke? Or the magic of her smile? She was a pretty muse As far as muses go But it did seem of late That she was losing her glow The muse sat and wondered At what had dimmed her light In playing hide and seek Was she lost of his sight? She thought to seek him out When to her great surprise She found him much bewitched By another Muse’s eyes At once all of her sparkle Her charm and beauty too Blew away with the wind She pondered what to do The muse just simply smiled Blew a kiss towards his face She changed into a fairy Flew away without a trace At times when the dear poet Sit downs to write a rhyme He finds the words are lost And he gets lost to time He wonders about the muse And in the flicker of candle light He can’t see the little fairy Just sparkles in the night The heavy hearted poet Is out of poetic tune He killed his inspiration He killed her off too soon But then again the fairy Smiles at him from afar She knows her work is done Now she’s just a guiding star. Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/19/2013 8:36:00 PM
Nice poem.
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Date: 5/27/2013 1:14:00 AM
Love it,, very cute,,,, I like to write on fairies ;}
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Date: 5/26/2013 12:12:00 AM
"as far as muses go"... sounds quite nonchalant... as far as Drama Queens go ;) LOL! Very enchanting, this one. A lot of sophisticated elements... death, betrayal and then a strange sense of hope in the end... I don't know how that works, but I love it.
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Date: 5/23/2013 3:33:00 PM
this is very charming. i especially love the beginning - "as far as muses go" is just delightful!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/24/2013 2:40:00 AM
:) Thank you my sweet Ilene! Glad that line caught your attention...I quite like it myself! ;)
Date: 5/23/2013 10:29:00 AM
Eileen, my experience is that she comes back with renewed vigor even after a break of fifteen years. This is a really inspired write, friend. She or rather he in your case seem to love you so much!! hugs :) Jag
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/23/2013 10:39:00 AM
:) I'm glad you stopped by, Jag. A visit is always welcome. Muses come and muses go, but as my dear friend Demetrios said...poetry must still well up from inside. :)
Date: 5/23/2013 9:06:00 AM
You are amazing! This is truly magical!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/23/2013 10:36:00 AM
:) Thanks, Richard! I'm touched.
Date: 5/23/2013 7:33:00 AM
What a roller coaster. The emotions are very gripping here.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/23/2013 7:35:00 AM
:) Well, you know me! The emotional fruitcake! Now that doesn't have to have a negative connotation, does it? ;) Fruit cake is yummy! Well, I must say chocolate cake is better...um...got carried away I guess! Thanks for the visit! :)
Date: 5/23/2013 6:35:00 AM
How sad when a muse dies! Poetry though is everlasting for in the heart of each poet is found! Inspiring him from within! A beautiful sad verse, lesson for every muse and every poet! Thank you!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/23/2013 7:13:00 AM
Very sad, my dear esteemed poet, but often...the inevitable. Nothing Gold Can Stay...according to Mr Frost. Eternal things can only remain....It is sad, nonetheless. Thank you for your treasured visit! Me Agapi Panta

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