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The Dead of Winter

In the dead of winter Mother Nature is callous and cruel The wind bites the cheeks as it whistles around the corner The ice crystals sting the eye like a desert sand storm Only to blind you with it's forceful gusts The land becomes colorless filled with white In the dead of winter Mother Nature is callous and cruel The trees become stripped of their leaves And the wind howls through the branches As the wind swirls and twirls It freezes everything in sight In the dead of winter Mother Nature is callous and cruel As sheer ice covers the landscape The snow drifts begin to pile looking like dunes of desert sand The roads start to become impassable In the dead of winter Mother nature is callous and cruel In the dead of winter Mother nature is callous and cruel The ponds and rivers freeze to solid ice Snow storms hit with a powerful vengeance Blinding everything in it's snowy path.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/17/2010 9:09:00 PM
PHyllis, I noticed that one line was moving to a different line position in each new stanza. Was this a type of Quatern? I have done a few of those. Do you experiment a lot with many forms of poems? I think you mentioned wanting to do a book of prairie poems. If you only want to do a chapbook, Marie at Shadowpoetry does a really cute job for people. Well, dear, I really should get upstairs. Once again. I've made myself tired being on here so long at night. See ya Thanks for all your comments!
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:09:00 PM
Oh, and I forgot to say, you did a great job describing why winter is so callous!
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:38:00 AM
It made me want to curl up with hot chocolate and a warm blanket...Very descriptive..Sara
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Date: 3/22/2010 6:47:00 AM
Very descriptive and real- I lived in Anchorage 10 years Brrrrr
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Date: 1/6/2010 4:03:00 PM
It can get VERY stormy in the middle of winter as you have said, Phyllis. But Floridians would probably bundle up, make snow angels, and have sword fights with icicles. IF they were caught in a snowy storm... That's what we did on one freezing Chicago night.
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Date: 1/1/2010 10:04:00 PM
a dreary write of the power of winter, but written very well with rhythm and style in freeverse form,I could feel and see all the decriptive points, very well penned,,and Thank you for reading and commenting,,,Blessings..cecil
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Date: 12/11/2009 9:15:00 PM
Very nice poem..Enjoyed reading.. Marty
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Date: 12/10/2009 9:56:00 PM
Coming from the tropics, this is also what I often think about the west. The barren wasteland of white. But then in the tropics, we have our own equivalent: when it's dry, it's really dry! Grasses don't grow, green turns brown, you name it. Yet this is what makes nature so beautiful: the renewal. The constant dying sure to be followed by the predictable rebirth. CYCLE. What a bore life would be if it's always spring or autumn or rain. Even the best things in life can't be overdone, right, Phyl?
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Date: 12/10/2009 10:44:00 AM
so why stay there? move to florida. john oh yeah thats right no health care, stay there.
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