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The Day I Swear I Saw An Angel

Pebbles plucked from the sole of my foot driven deep into wounds cut from a path a path leading me to nowhere trying to escape troubles quell worries worries that haunt shamelessly searching for answers to life's questions I come upon a seaside café thirsting I make my way to a corner table the room dimly lit but I can feel I feel the gentle touch of a woman overcome me I taste the sea's salty kiss upon my lips blowing in through the white laced drapery adorning the arched window holding at bay the hot September sun as I await for my glass of Mondavi red a trio softly plays a heavenly tune the sounds of the violin sooth my shattered soul to sleep. Two, three, five, maybe more glasses and I meander my way out to the pearl white beach in hopes of catching a glimpse of her beauty one last wink of her eye before she gives way to a darkened sky Staring off out to the East... was I supposed to look West... I long for one last glimpse one last kiss upon my cheek When suddenly before me She appears how could I ever forget those almond eyes so soft and sweet...love dripping out that little killer smile...almost grabbed my heart ruby red lips an olive glow of heaven, she came. I know speaking of stories and sharing mysteries how she grabbed my arm and couldn't let go we splashed through the surf we could have been the last two left on earth how the skies sparkled how we danced for what seemed like eternity I laid down and she said goodnight Now as I wake with a beaten red face the sun standing high breathing fire down upon me I wonder was it all just a dream or a special memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/17/2015 12:46:00 PM
TIM, wonderful win. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/27/2015 11:38:00 AM
wow wow wow....amazing poem :) love and peace tim :) to favs
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Date: 10/25/2015 4:30:00 PM
Well you had me going I so enjoyed how the verse tumbled in aspiration! Light & Love
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Date: 10/25/2015 10:25:00 AM
I swear! You've got a strong Romance gene running in that soul of of yours... And all I can say is: Go Baby Go! You eeven got Grandpa Troll with a tear streaking down his cheek... WOW! You're amazing... You know...
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Date: 10/24/2015 7:52:00 PM
You've been touched my friend. One touched by an angel the world tis never the same! Super 7.....
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Date: 10/23/2015 7:53:00 AM
A dream or a memory, it doesn't matter my friend, Tim, for as long as you have sensed it and lived it then it is real! Etheric and aesthetic writing deserving the highest rate!
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:40:00 AM
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:38:00 AM
Whatever it was a dream or a memory..It definitely sounds beautiful and very romantic. I always forget rating but this poem deserves a 7. On our island We have Marsovin wine too.
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Date: 10/23/2015 1:37:00 AM
Cleverly done Tim must be a lovely woman to warrant such comparison to a heavenly angel. I really enjoyed reading this majestic piece of yours..
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Date: 10/22/2015 7:38:00 PM
Wow! This is quite the dream to have a completely beautiful and tempting dream you've had and written.
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:50:00 PM
Memory or dream. I think it is gorgeous!
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Date: 10/22/2015 2:43:00 PM
A beautiful dream you tell us, Tim. Julia, with my best regards.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/22/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thanks Julia

Book: Shattered Sighs