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It seems like after every event -- big or small -- their is a day after.  This is what I saw when my world crashed and burned . . . a day after . . . and more days after.  Hope you enjoy the poem and the images.  Live and love generously!!

?David

 

 

The day that followed . . . Blossomed blue, bright . . . beautiful Clouds towering into the heavens Wheeling white, wonderful . . . wordless The clouds danced in the expanse Rolling on a sea of silence Sailing soft, supple . . . serene Saw nothing Cared nothing Floated away Alone . . . . . blind . . . . . marvelous mute! The trees . . . The trees reveled in their own wild E m o t I o n s Old Man Walnut – a true heart-wood Big boned brooded black Dark, dangerous, defiant Lady oak took red at the edges A deep striking flame-red Her heart a luscious lively living green A gentlewoman of a long experience Patient, Peaceful, persistent and powerful Elms burst yellow – effulgent Cried for attention Demanded attention Wind whistled wantonly through her leaves Tall, tenacious, testy, temerarious Some of the maples slurred A bright primary red Like harlots laughing, listening, languishing Showed interest but cared for nothing The Sweetgums stood aloof Star-shaped leaves Like bruises oozing deep purple At first draft S N T A O K O E D D Abused . . . abandoned . . . alone Crape Myrtles cluster together Gossiping busy-bodies Bursting orange with outrageous desire Watching, wanting, waiting, wanton Modest were the Aspens Slender and graceful Giggling trees But where they were They were so many They could afford to be Modest, monomorphic, musical, memorable The Pines and firs Raising forth green among the colors Unchanging Unwilling to change Criticizing by their contrast every other change The Woods The woods The chaotic woods The heartless forest And the trees . . . . . . . .The boughs, leafs, limbs, roots That whole glorious community Simply went about its Natural business Another day in creation. Live and Love Generously

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/10/2017 9:49:00 PM
Oh how I love your beautiful poetry, David! I wanted to thank you for thinking of me while I was caring for my mom. I had to put PS aside but now I'm happily back enjoying poetry once again. I hope you and yours are we'll and you'll be visiting soon. L&B, Rhonda:)
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Date: 1/16/2017 12:52:00 AM
WoW! From one to seven I give this a 10 The description here is absolutely breathtaking. It captures the reader from beginning to end. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/22/2016 7:06:00 PM
Love this!...your description of the forest is so wonderful! Feel sorry for poor naked tree though ha ha...have a great holiday:)
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Date: 12/21/2016 8:43:00 PM
Well, I love trees and I love this poem. Great personification! Carole
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Date: 12/20/2016 11:40:00 AM
A beautifully crafted piece of prose, David...Truly a joy to read! My very warmest wishes...And a merry Christmas! :) P.s Quite obviously a seven.
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Date: 12/20/2016 1:15:00 AM
This is deep and lovely, David:) trees are indeed standing miracles of God's creation:) a 7:)
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Date: 12/19/2016 1:01:00 PM
Your personification of the 'standing people' is fabulous!! Awesome allegory, too!! Well done. Big Hugggs,David. Deb
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Date: 12/19/2016 12:32:00 AM
David while reading this magnificent creation I entered rapture! Mere words can't express....a fave and please keep writing more like this awe inspiring beauty! Have a blessed holiday! Connie
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Date: 12/4/2016 1:37:00 PM
beautifully written..welcome back :)
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Date: 12/2/2016 9:45:00 PM
David. it's been a while since I saw your wondrous poetry. Wow, you have come back with a real winner here. A long time ago I had wanted to do a book and just write poems for all the different trees, Gosh, you nearly accomplished the same thing right here. Wonderfully descriptive. A BIG SEVEN
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Date: 12/2/2016 4:03:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, David! You are truly one with nature and its creator. I love the presentation, the imagery, the alliteration and the musicality of the whole poem. #7++ Pleased to see you back in action, my friend:) Regards // paul
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Date: 12/2/2016 2:20:00 AM
David, my friend , you seem to have come out of a spiritual experience that has illuminated you so you to be able to approach our Lord and creato. A huge seven!
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Date: 12/1/2016 11:59:00 PM
This sounds like you've been out in the woods a lot, David , enjoying the serenity of nature. Wonderful write
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Date: 12/1/2016 9:47:00 PM
This is so creative and beautiful, its so great to see you back writing, I hope all is well with you! :)
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