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The Dawn

The Dawn The Dawn, with enormous slowness, penetrates Chasing darkness back behind his gates Where, displaced, he will a while reside Forced to retreat before the crimson tide That creeps across the land until she frees All from the night, she moves by sure degrees The orange glimmer runs to thinnest blue And on to black with ever changing hue The heavens bow, the stars they disappear One by one, until the sky is clear The golden dome erupts and light she spreads To encourage all to leave their beds The moon decides it’s time to slink away Out shone by mornings colour filled array The welcome lamp arrives to please the trees The creatures of the day, the flowers, bees The birds awake and then begin to raise In raptures to her glory, songs of praise Once more the spectre of eternal night She breaks and gives the Earth her wondrous light Then man knows best his insignificance Looks on in awe at her magnificence Alone he stands upon this modest hill And prays she comes each day And always will.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/26/2015 6:02:00 PM
This is still amazing Richard, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/4/2014 6:36:00 AM
Wonderful poem, your favorite one. Congrats on the win, Seal
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Date: 2/4/2014 12:29:00 AM
Very breathtakingly beautiful, Mr Seal.....Enjoyed the read immensely and all the posts. Good to know you're active again. This goes to my favorite poem's folder as your name which resides in my favorite poet folder.
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:38:00 PM
you have described the coming of the dawn with beauty and finesse; the final stanza is particularly strong and those closing lines are memorable - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 8/6/2013 2:56:00 PM
thanks for your comments on Deep Voodoo. I so agree with you on "limitations" and yet I set them all the time in my contests simply because I don't want to deal with super long poems. (I often print them out to judge them. Hate doing it online. I love doing it in sunshine and that's why I enjoy short poems in my contests!)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/6/2013 6:26:00 PM
Yeah, and keeping them short saves on ink and paper, you miser lol. I guess it's part of the contest, rules is rules, though I do struggle with short poems I'll admit. With me, I know whether a poem is any good or not by line ten if not before. :)
Date: 7/28/2013 11:45:00 PM
YEs YES THATs what I'm talking about!!!!! (thanks for editing it!!)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 7/29/2013 2:41:00 AM
Yes I think you were right, coming back to it and reading it fresh it makes better reading, thank you
Date: 7/28/2013 7:14:00 AM
this is still beautiful!!!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 7/28/2013 10:05:00 AM
Ok, I'd forgotten about trying your suggestion, so I'll do it now, thank you, and surely you have better things to do than make comments like this lol
Date: 7/22/2013 7:43:00 PM
I like how you weave your colours in the first part. Brilliant piece, Richard. Licia :-)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 7/28/2013 10:03:00 AM
I'm waybehind in my responses Licia, thank you for this comment, I like how you weave your colours too
Date: 6/14/2013 12:44:00 PM
Richard; This is just beautiful. I love it. Thanks for sharing. I am feeling a little better so I'm reading some poetry. Lucilla
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/14/2013 6:34:00 PM
So pleased your feeling better Lucy, I'm sure the the days ahead will be goo to you. thank you for your lovely comment.
Date: 6/12/2013 4:37:00 AM
A thought-provoking poem with wondrous pictures of extreme beauty! Thank you!
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Date: 6/14/2013 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios, pleased you enjoyed it, much appreciated
Date: 6/8/2013 5:55:00 AM
The moon decides- now that's a thought. Not much to say, you have lovely comments. This will be the first poem I mark as a favorite. Haven't had a favorite poem in almost 2 months. *Skat
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/9/2013 7:00:00 AM
Yes I always see it as the sun chasing the moon and the moon giving in. Always an honour to have one faved, thank you and for your equally lovely comment
Date: 6/7/2013 10:01:00 PM
Oh the beauty of a glorious beautiful day....captured here..
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/9/2013 6:50:00 AM
Hi Donna, hope all your days are beautiful ones
Date: 6/7/2013 6:26:00 PM
wow, thank you for taking me into the journey of an everyday day ray that penetrates into the deepest part of the soul...almost waking up in to the arms of the unknown. goodbye moon, hello DAWN... hugs... a nice embracing poem... *Happily Ever Linda*
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Date: 6/9/2013 6:49:00 AM
Thank you for this lovely comment Linda, it's a poem in itself
Date: 6/7/2013 6:19:00 PM
Hello Richard, let me see now how am I going to stare you in the face, after all the lovely comments you left on my poems. I know! How about a smile! :-)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/9/2013 6:45:00 AM
Your smile is gratefully received my Sweet Dark Friend, though you could try to out stare me if you like ha ha
Date: 6/6/2013 8:41:00 PM
Love it Richard ;} thanks for reading remember us. Alzheimer is sad .
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/7/2013 12:40:00 PM
Anytime Debbie, thanks for dropping by
Date: 6/6/2013 12:53:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful, Richard! I loved the all encompassing feel of this... and of course that's all too fitting for who, might I ask, doesn't get swallowed whole into the splendor of the rising sun? Glorious, my friend!
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Date: 6/6/2013 7:08:00 PM
I'm an early riser and espeially on those mornings where you can tell it's going rise big, bold an beautiful I go out into my garden and just watch it and see the world come to life, least my world. Thanks for the glowing comment Tim, scuse the pun lol
Date: 6/5/2013 10:55:00 PM
this is really beautiful. I have only one suggestion. I think if you made it into stanzas and separated it in a few places, it would give it more OOMPH!! Is it for any contest? Yes, it's so pretty.
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Date: 6/6/2013 6:50:00 PM
I tussled for two days whether to put the breaks in it myself. I still don't know. I did do it in four six line stanzas but it it did not look right to me then. Now you've set wondering Petal, I won't sleep tonight lol. I like the first four words of your comment best, thank you

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