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The Crystal Vase

Shattered glass Like my life, in pieces Glittering fragments Waiting to be swept away As raindrops, build Into torrential rains So now I may drown In the flood of life The river flows Towards death

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Casarah Nance

Date: 4/17/2014 2:34:00 PM

Beautiful imagery :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/17/2014 11:58:00 PM

Very kind of you, thanks!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2013 5:58:00 AM

Arthur I have read some lovely poems today and this is up in the top super TFS enjoyed Shadow x smiles

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/26/2013 9:23:00 PM

thank you so much!!

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/25/2013 12:45:00 AM

Great write my friend .....Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/26/2013 9:25:00 PM

thank you oh Great One!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/25/2013 12:05:00 AM

Life is, as you know, made of pieces, the question is: What is the glue that stick them together? Each one of us has to give an answer, and the answer he gives will provide the reason to go on! Death is certain, we should not rush! LIFE is the challenge, there we should turn our attention! Lovely poem! Thank you for visiting!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/26/2013 9:24:00 PM

and thank you!!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/24/2013 11:13:00 PM

Very moving.....I hope this is just an awesome testimony to your creative genius and not a reflection of what you are going through.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/26/2013 9:24:00 PM

I refer you to the poem " I am a Genius" LOL