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The Crossing

1. On the bank of oblivion’s river A soul hastily arrives Wishing to cross on the other side Where eternity resides 2. Has been preparing for the crossing Since the first day of her birth But now that the moment is so near She is afraid of her death 3. More few moments she is begging For much better to prepare Before the Charon with his boat Her, to perpetuity transfers 4. Death however is adamant Since to delay he can not So he is reminding the soul That it is her mortal lot 5. With dread, she is now boarding For the trip of no return But surprised she is to find That this is of no concern 6. As the crossing is completed And the soul disembarks On the land of sanctified This is now what remarks 7. All worries and all burdens That she carried all along When imprisoned in the body In that place don’t belong 8. For the first time, she is sensing Real freedom in her being Such an amount of love and beauty This world has never seen 9. At an instance, she turns holy And with angels, she soars To the heavens of the blessed Where her creator adores! © Demetrios Trifiatis 16 OCTOBER 2013 *Reposted poem – in honor of our loving PoetrySoup friend and a personal friend, Lucilla Charillo, who died on 27th September 2014! Lucilla, we miss you already! You with God now! Rest In Peace! Here is Lucilla’s comment on “ THE CROSSING” Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/16/2013 8:28:00 AM My friend Demetrios; I have been sad for the past few days, but this really made me cry. This is very heartfelt and touching to the soul. A - 7 and I loved this poem. Thank you so much and God bless you always.... Lucilla

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Date: 1/20/2015 6:53:00 PM
Reading your words with Lucilla's comment adds resonance to the piece.
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Date: 10/1/2014 12:05:00 PM
This is so beautiful and touching. What a heart felt tribute. You are a good man, sir. God Bless You. A woman as kind as Lucilla is safe in Gods hand but what a loss is felt by so many who knew and loved her.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2014 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Maurice, for arriving at that conclusion, you are not wrong, my poems are my witnesses! Yes, Lucy was one of a kind!
Date: 9/30/2014 8:18:00 PM
oh wow, to see this posted with the words that she said to you, that makes it such a special post. I really loved seeing this tonight, Demetrios. Bless you.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2014 1:10:00 PM
I thought it would be most appropriate, now that she arrived at her celestial home! Thank you ,Andrea, for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 9/29/2014 7:08:00 PM
this is so heartfelt beautiful god love her precious soul may she be forever dancing with the angels
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2014 1:12:00 PM
Be certain my friend, Liam, Lucy has already started her dance with the angels! Thank you for your visit and heartfelt comment!
Date: 9/29/2014 1:13:00 PM
- Demetrios, I just say: THANK YOU! - I'm so sad, she was a beautiful person - R.I.P. my dear friend Lucilla - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2014 1:29:00 PM
Yes, she was a lady! Sorrow has occupied my heart! Thank you too, dear Anne Lise!
Date: 9/29/2014 3:57:00 AM
Demetrios....you have written a masterpiece of light and hope. Bless you. I know that Lucilla loved your work and was a dear friend. You have honored her well. My heart is sad...for though I know she is no longer in pain...those who remain carry the pain of missing someone. Thank you for sharing.
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