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The Crimson Lips of Dawn

The crimson lips of dawn Have kissed the morning sky Making it turn red with blush As clouds go whisping by The colors are magnificent With hues of orange and red The yellow from the rising sun Puts night time shades to bed The ocean gives reflection With its diamond coated waves Pipers dance a ballet And the seagulls act like knaves Further in the traffic Of the city starts to flow The hustle and the bustle People moving to and fro The noise is quite abundant There's confusion all around There is no peace and quiet Only inner city sounds But then the dawn moves westward Toward the mountains and the plains The wheat feilds stand and wave their hands As breezes sing refrains This is where I long to be When lost inside my mind Nesting with the eagles In a lonely mountain pine Or camped along the riverside Fishing with the bears I'll build a dam with beavers And I'll climb some mountain stairs And I'll chase the sun. If must, I'll run To reach the western sea To find if crimson lips will kiss The setting sun for me Rockman :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/13/2013 9:22:00 AM
Dear Rockman - Thank you for your comment and suggestion about my sea poem. I think it's right on. This poem is beautiful and I think a little like mine in flavor. 'Seagulls act like knaves' is inspired. I"ve just had a knee replacement and only now have seen your comment. I'm slowly getting back to my e-mails. love, Kathy p,s, I'll come back and read more.
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:53:00 PM
I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD
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Date: 5/19/2013 9:26:00 PM
CONGRATS !!! Thanks 4 painting my sky RED :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/17/2013 10:47:00 AM
Magnificent! You get a seven from me! Thank you!
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Date: 2/4/2013 3:44:00 PM
Love the combination of life and romance. :)
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Date: 2/2/2013 8:30:00 PM
That made me feel like I was in a warm breeze of lovelinee.
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:51:00 AM
I love the words and adoren that color.
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Date: 7/27/2012 11:03:00 AM
Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Randy. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2012 2:52:00 PM
This is deserving of your big win...loved each stanza. BG
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Date: 7/25/2012 4:38:00 AM
Wow very good write & a big congratulation on your win :)
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:38:00 AM
Rockman congrats on your win , an excellent write, very descriptive..David
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Date: 7/24/2012 7:30:00 PM
Beautiful images - a lovely poem you have drawn. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/24/2012 6:33:00 PM
Rockman, I am blown away by this great piece, a well deserved win...it could not be any other way. Blessings and one love. Joy Wells
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Date: 7/24/2012 5:46:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..((()))Congrats...Sara
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Date: 7/24/2012 5:42:00 PM
congrats Rockman on a great first place write and win for lips ..luv..
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Date: 7/24/2012 4:54:00 PM
Great use of personification! Congrad's on your big win! So nice to meet you. Light & Love
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:51:00 AM
Enjoyed the above verse, paying a wee bit more attention to syllable count and meter would even make it better! [I was into life role play for years in the SCA are you familiar?] Light & Love
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