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The Concert

It was a summery San Francisco evening. Dressed in tight jeans, I was the modern mother taking my daughter to the first and last concert of our youthful days together. Though we sat back in the general admission seats of a huge amphitheater, the excitement all around us was palpable. The audience, mostly women, screamed with delight each time we heard the first few notes of our heartthrob’s songs exploding, immediately recognizable, from the speakers strategically placed around us. The sky began to darken as lights played upon the stage, enhancing our idol’s chiseled features on the wide screen above us.. No longer able to contain ourselves, most of us were on our feet. As the beat from the band pulsated through us, body and soul, we became a mass of swaying flesh, uniting ourselves with this enthralling performer in the only way we knew how. Unable to stop, I let the music guide my hips inside those skinny jeans as I stood there grooving to hit after hit after hit! That night I was sexy, free, and forever young, and I was one with them all in pop rock paradise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/7/2015 10:15:00 AM
Hear you on this one took our son to his first rock concert . love phyl
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Date: 6/20/2015 12:19:00 PM
Love it Andrea, I felt I was there as I read through your poem. Congrats on your win, James :)
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Date: 6/11/2015 4:03:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:31:00 PM
I bet you've still got the poster on the inside of your closet door. Come on- admit it. Great write, Andrea, and congrats from Viv (still a spotty adolescent on the inside) x
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Date: 6/10/2015 9:10:00 PM
sexy skinny jeans wiggled your hips. this time, into the winners circle. CONGRATULATIONS...
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:10:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 6/10/2015 2:31:00 PM
A great write about wonderful memories, Andrea! Congrats on your awesome win! Sandra
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Date: 6/10/2015 2:26:00 PM
congratulations Andrea on this winning concert write, well done.
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Date: 6/10/2015 1:48:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/9/2015 6:02:00 PM
an exceptional pen Andrea so nice to share it with your daughter treasure the memory hugs 7
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Date: 6/7/2015 6:20:00 PM
Forgot to ask, who's the heartthrob?
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Date: 6/7/2015 6:16:00 PM
I remember those days...feeling young and free with the energy of the music taking on a life of its own. When I go to a concert, I still get that feeling. It's pure joy and you captured it! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/2/2015 2:24:00 AM
What a great memory to have Andrea. Magical moments like this stay with us forever. Beautifully written , capturing the excitement of the concert......kind regards----John
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Date: 6/1/2015 12:50:00 PM
A sweet memory of youth beautifully expressed. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 6/1/2015 9:01:00 AM
They grow up fast...and we grow up faster (well, sort of ;-) )
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Date: 5/30/2015 7:22:00 PM
What an awesome write and memory you have shared with us : ) ....you'll always be forever young. Hugs
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Date: 5/30/2015 5:15:00 PM
You became one with the music ...A rocking good write Andrea...best wishes...
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Date: 5/30/2015 10:10:00 AM
The last part is awesome!!! This was a very smooth and well written poem. I definitely enjoyed it
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Date: 5/27/2015 3:08:00 PM
been there done that,,thanks for the memories, Andrea, wonderful poem..
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Date: 5/26/2015 11:43:00 PM
So what was the idol's name? How cool that you got to enjoy that experience with your daughter.
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Date: 5/26/2015 10:04:00 PM
Reminds me of the many rock concerts I attended when was younger - including the Kinks, the Grateful Dead, the Jefferson Airplane, and the Moody Blues. I have a poem similar to this one - "For the Rockers". I enjoyed this. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/26/2015 2:47:00 PM
Groovy. Son, Arthur, did a concert and a recording recently with The Grateful Dead. He had a ball, but, being by polar, got carried away and worried his wife, Donna. I thought the Grateful Dead had died long ago, but no. Love, daver
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Date: 5/26/2015 4:52:00 AM
The Concert may have ended that night or next morning but the colors of that vibrant programme which made you looking younger and beautiful (sexy) and would stay here on these pages dear friend as a beautiful sketch of that scene in which Carrie Richards too was witness of this grand happening. Love and best wishes..Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 5/25/2015 7:24:00 PM
It is very possible, I have been in that very same crowd !! So you were the blond sitting in front of me, in those sexy skinny jeans?? !! I was the one screaming behind you!!
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Date: 5/25/2015 4:39:00 PM
Andrea, love this, so visual that I felt I was there with you, well written 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, s&s
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