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The Clouds and the Sun

THE CLOUDS AND THE SUN The day arrived on her galloping horse of the color gray The sun, hidden behind the clouds, wanted to play They let him through from time to time to have a peep But never allowed him their fluffy mass ever to reap Suddenly the angered storm pulled down the blind, Reminding the sun that the time has come for good to hide Then came the thunder and was followed by the rain, It dissipated the clouds and left the sun to shine again. © Demetrios Trifiatis 02 JUNE 2013

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Date: 6/17/2013 5:08:00 AM
a definite 7 Demetrios so breathtakingly beautiful love it one for favs Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/2/2013 5:43:00 AM
Yes, I just LOVE this incredible write my friend! This is a wondrous and awe inspiring poem Demetrios! I am in complete bewilderment by the grandiose sight of the sun and the clouds! I just love the meaning behind your delightful poem! You have written a harmonious piece here this morning! What an amazing poem, Great Work!!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/2/2013 8:20:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend, Russell. Your visit always a joy. Thank you for your bighearted comment!
Date: 6/2/2013 12:46:00 AM
Delightfully beautiful....
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/2/2013 8:24:00 AM
Dear Eileen, Than you from the bottom of my heart for your visit and your cordial comment!

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