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The Bulldozer and Aging Religion

Walking the path I know to be the way The path in which I was born There comes a bulldozer Making me a new way Ruffling my smooth way, my religion With flimsy sand of thoughts and glory Promising life in death and fulfilment The new Islam seems brilliant, luxurious, exotic and rubbish comes with rejection of many things, sunnah My aging Islam, a pleasant smiles with tolerance warm accommodation I stand on a point in the labyrinth listening to the songs of both paths they both sing in a tone That makes me lost Of which part to take.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/26/2017 12:47:00 PM
Not easy but probably the one with the strongest feeling? The one your heart desires most :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 10:27:00 PM
I can link with this. Changes are brought for the better and not for segregation of thoughts and freedom. After all we are all human! Glad you shared this with us. All the best. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/25/2017 5:32:00 PM
Very interesting, Afolabi. Follow the path that offers the most tolerance of others with love and peace! Love your symbolic poem.
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:56:00 PM
Making choices is not always easy, Afolabi. We seek to follow the truth, but extremism can be unhealthy. Follow your heart and mind... Regards // paul
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:13:00 PM
Yes, you are right. Thank you.
Date: 8/24/2017 11:21:00 AM
A dilemma for any thinking man of any religion. Love should always be the guiding principle to any faith. Without it there is but chaos...
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:12:00 PM
Thank you friend.
Date: 8/24/2017 10:49:00 AM
Look to your heart...feel the rhythm...take two aspirin and call me in the morning lol...a poetic dilemma...great write Aolabi...god bless...^WW^
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/26/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thank you friend.
Date: 8/24/2017 8:28:00 AM
God, by any name, is neither old not new for He was is and always will be what changes is the way we look at God! Brilliant writing my friend, Afolabi. The answer to your dilemma is to be found withing you! Wonderfully written my friend!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/26/2017 12:05:00 PM
I appreciate your comment always. Thanks
Date: 8/23/2017 6:49:00 AM
Inner thoughts well expressed!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/26/2017 12:01:00 PM
Thank you.

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