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The Broken Hearts

The world is full of broken hearts, so mine was nothing new, and anyone who loves someone could lose that person too. I thought I'd found the one for me the day I danced with you; I gave my heart without reserve; you knew I would be true. Alas for me, your love was false, and so I'm feeling blue - although my broken heart will mend. This feels like deja vu... written 17th September for Constance's All the Little Pieces contest

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Date: 10/17/2016 8:04:00 AM
This one has great rhythm, flow and rhyme..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Way to go..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/2/2016 9:16:00 AM
Mate, that there is a testament to how devastating times create great poetry. Shame really.
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Date: 9/27/2016 7:40:00 AM
Amazing poetry Jack, one can feel the anguish, in every word...
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Date: 9/26/2016 10:40:00 AM
Very lovely, Jack! It's true that many suffer the pain of broken hearts, but it is our own personal experience that really strikes home! ~ Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/25/2016 12:13:00 PM
A lovely but sad write, Jack! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/24/2016 10:39:00 AM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad and beautifully penned poem ~
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Date: 9/23/2016 4:38:00 PM
A lovely piece about broken hearts. love phyl
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Date: 9/17/2016 8:19:00 PM
Jack, you did a great job with this one. It's a little bit different from you and I like it a lot! Catching up here tonight and needing to get off here soon. Catch you tomorrow, matey!
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Date: 9/17/2016 4:03:00 PM
Good to see you back in action Jack, hope all is well...best wishes
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Date: 9/17/2016 3:53:00 PM
Think many of us can relate to this scenario and have had our heart broken:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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