The Bird Vireo

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high in the forest a little songster of songs such sweet phrases and pauses (chattering, rambling, warbling) hops along branches hidden in the canopy a melody echoing . . . _____________________ January 15, 2016 Sedoka

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Ann Roske

Date: 1/22/2016 1:12:00 PM

this write made me smile. I too love my feathered friends. Well wishes.

Constance La France
Date: 1/23/2016 12:11:00 AM

Ann, thank you so much for visiting, I am a bit of a bird watcher, although not that good at identifying, just loving ~

White Sage

Date: 1/16/2016 5:23:00 AM

excellent write BW...

Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2016 8:21:00 AM

Sage, thanks for the excellent !

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/16/2016 5:19:00 AM

Symphony of nature composed by Broken Wing! A seven!

Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2016 8:22:00 AM

Demetrios , oh, did you hear the symphony in my words, thanks you so much for the 7, as you can tell I am a bird lover !

Eve Roper

Date: 1/15/2016 9:46:00 PM

Great poem, Broken Wing, I can hear them sing

Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2016 8:24:00 AM

Eve, thanks for the great, oh those divine, sublime little birds are singing in the trees non stop, they love to sing, apparently they have hundreds of songs, all different