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The Big Boyz

They tell me that I'm not hip because out of the bottle, I don't want to take a sip. Going out to get drunk beyond recognition, they’re like a car and the liquor is their fuel for ignition. How can they do this when it makes them down? They live by it and in it, their thoughts are forever drowned. They can continue to do it knowing that it causes pain and takes away their joy. I now see them all slowly withering away, hands/hearts still clutching their bottles because they're known as the big boyz.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 8/1/2008 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/30/2008 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Larry. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:47:00 AM
Some are more mature than others. They never see it that way. Congrats on a good write being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:44:00 AM
As the song goes, it's hip to be square.
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:32:00 AM
Glad you are on the outside looking in. Very sad for them. Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured again. Love, Shar
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