The Bends

Under the Elm Tree The wind bends the ragged weeds slowely the light fades

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John Heck

Date: 11/30/2008 4:56:00 AM

Jeanine - Congratulations on your 3 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/1/2008 6:42:00 PM

Jeanine - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2008 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 8/9/2008 6:40:00 PM

A beautiful moving Haiku dear Jeanine. lainie

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/5/2008 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful haiku being featured once again. Love, Shar

Cayetano Young

Date: 8/4/2008 8:56:00 PM

congratulations on your poem being featured this week! very well deserve! nice write warm regards GiNo,18,Philippines

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/4/2008 7:18:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku - congrats on being featured this week

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/4/2008 6:01:00 AM

Congrats on the re-featuring of your haiku, 'The Bends." Vince