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The Ballpark Part 2 the Game

It only took about ten minutes for me to warm up, so, I had time to play catch with a friend on my team. The line-ups were given to the umpire, the umpire yelled two of my favorite words, “Play Ball”. We were the visitors, so we batted first. Our games were between four and six innings long, depending on the time. Our games were limited to one and a half hours. I was a good hitter, so I usually hit third in the line-up. A ground out, then a strike out, it was my turn to bat. The count went to 2-2, then the pitcher made a mistake, it was right over the plate; I slapped it to left field for a single. The coach signaled me to steal second. I was a very short kid, but also very fast. On the first pitch I was off and running, and got my first stolen base of the season. Our next batter was our clean-up hitter. He slammed the first pitch over the center field fence. It was great to score, but more fun to watch Johnny do his homerun jog around the bases. The whole team mobbed him at the plate, then the next batter grounded out to the first baseman. I was happy to have a 2-0 lead as I threw my warm-up pitches. The catcher caught the last pitch and pegged it down to second. I took a second to enjoy the moment under the lights, got the signal from my catcher and fired my first strike. I struck out the first two hitters, then the third hitter lined out to the second baseman and the inning was over. The other pitcher and I were both on, and the rest of the game was scoreless. I finished all six innings with eight strikeouts. I only allowed one walk and two hits in my 2-0 shutout. I had a walk and another stolen base to finish the night. Mom and dad took me to Dairy Queen for a burger and fries. My dream had come true, I played at The Ballpark. My team won, I pitched well and got a hit and two stolen bases. We went undefeated that year and the next. We won the league championship both years. My dad got a new job and we moved from Texas to Oklahoma. Everything in my life changed, but it didn’t matter; my dream came true!

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Date: 8/19/2022 7:21:00 PM
Bill, this is a highly energetic and positive poem. You have mastered the knack of narrating stories in a very seamless manner. Blessings dear friend.
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Bill Baker
Date: 8/20/2022 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. I'm trying a few different form for variety. :-) The spice of life! Bill
Date: 8/18/2022 4:41:00 PM
Bill this is such a wonderful experience to cherish for the rest of your life. It is wonderful when wishes come true. This one came true for you my friend... God bless you...
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Date: 8/19/2022 2:26:00 PM
Great memory. A blessed day! Thanks for commenting, Michael. Bill
Date: 8/16/2022 1:18:00 PM
So pleased that your dream came true Bill, the team did very well indeed to go undefeated for two years and winning the league championship twice. The story is well written, a wonderful souvenir of that happy time in your life… Belle
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Bill Baker
Date: 8/16/2022 5:25:00 PM
Yep, still smiling about this memory. Thanks for commenting my friend. Hugs, Bill
Date: 8/16/2022 6:13:00 AM
First of all, great story. Also, easy read which for me is also great. It is those kind of childhood memories that stick around for a lifetime. Happy memories.
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Date: 8/16/2022 8:09:00 AM
Thanks, Miranda, I enjoyed the memory and writing about it. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend, Bill
Date: 8/15/2022 9:02:00 AM
Wonderful writing on the happiness of dream coming true. Great narration like story-telling. Picturesque and vivid. By the way, thank you very much for your very generous appreciation of my poems. Your encouragements give me great push when my spirit is down. May God Bless You!
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Date: 8/15/2022 4:23:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj, for your comments and encouragement on my poetry. Bill
Date: 8/15/2022 4:51:00 AM
This is the most exciting game I have ever seen, my dearest friend, Bill! I wonder why you didn't follow up! Thank you for the thrill. Be blessed!
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Bill Baker
Date: 8/15/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, my kind friend , Demetrios. Your comments are uplifting and give me energy to learn and write more. Have a blessed week! Bill
Date: 8/14/2022 11:43:00 AM
This is a beautiful memory , the time you spent in this league. you made a dream come true!! Now I am wondering why things changed in oklahoma!!
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Date: 8/14/2022 5:42:00 PM
The moving and school changing started that year. I went to 3 different schools in the 6th grade and 2 in the 7th grade. Alot changed as I got in to High School and eligibility became a problem with all the moves. Getting chatty again. lol Thanks for the comments my dear friend. Smiles and Hugs, Bill
Date: 8/14/2022 9:55:00 AM
Hi Bill, congratulations my friend. On both the winning and the wonderful way in which you told your tale. Well Bill, I also liked my sport. I liked running, used to do my twelve miles in the morning and my six miles at night. I could tell how much this meant to you, through your excellent writing. If the first part was a fave, then this part has to be a double fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend ..... Mike.
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Date: 8/14/2022 5:39:00 PM
By the time I entered High School my favorite sport was Cross-Country in the Fall and Track and Field in the Spring. I coached distance running in High School and College and ran 5k's, 10k's and marathons until I reached 50. I love running long distance. We can talk running on soup mail if you'd like. Thanks for the FAV's my friend, Bill
Date: 8/14/2022 6:42:00 AM
Well done my friend. Pleasant childhood memories --a game to remember!
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Date: 8/14/2022 8:58:00 AM
Still do! lol fun write. Thanks for the comment Vijay, Bill
Date: 8/14/2022 5:41:00 AM
A very spirited optimistic share Bill, you have a flawless art of storytelling smoothly.
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Date: 8/14/2022 8:58:00 AM
Thank you for your kind and encouraging words, Silpika. Always good to see you've visited and commented on one of my poems. Blessings my friend, Bill
Date: 8/14/2022 3:11:00 AM
Thanks for your descriptive words--words that took us back to a thrilling childhood moment. Wasn't expecting the last stanza, a life-changing event that must've crushed your excited, fulfilled little spirit. Grateful for your positive attitude, though. Plus, I'm reminded of those words, "Take me out to the ballgame, take me out to the crowd, I don't care if we ever go back.."
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Date: 8/14/2022 8:56:00 AM
Get song! Thanks for the memory, Sara, and the comment. Hugs, Bill
Date: 8/13/2022 8:12:00 PM
A great American story, Bill!! Love it. 'My DQ Dream! Huzzah! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/14/2022 8:55:00 AM
Made me smile again, Gershon. Thanks, my friend. Bill
Date: 8/13/2022 5:31:00 PM
Loved it Bill. Very descriptive. Forwarding to my family. They will adore it, Panagiota XXX
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/14/2022 6:05:00 AM
Grandson played for years in LL. Was on freshman HS team. Wii try out for Sophomore baseball.teamJust back from Tennessee, where he had pitching training this summer. He lives baseball. Now 6 feet tall. I am a midget.LOL. Panagiota. Xxx
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Bill Baker
Date: 8/13/2022 7:38:00 PM
Glad you liked it. True story of my baseball when I was 11 and 12. Thanks for the comment my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

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