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The Awakening

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The Awakening

Dawn
inflames,
arousing
pink passion of
trembling dew-damp bloom;
peach bliss of morning's kiss
coaxes a roseate flush;
warmed inner whorls teased to unfold,
the blushing bud swelling to open,
sun tonguing fragile folds, petals parting.

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  1. Date: 10/8/2012 11:37:00 PM
    Beautiful! How sweet this is! Cynthia

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 4:00:00 PM
    Filled with double entendre, this, but how else could it end--"petals" parting, of course! :-) Having a great time, here.

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 8:52:00 AM
    Ps. Smile ˜ Wow!:)

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  1. Date: 3/13/2012 5:38:00 PM
    I love this...A lot of life here...Great write :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 7:50:00 PM
    i see blooming. john

  1. Date: 2/15/2012 9:38:00 AM
    wonderful words of a new day, so sensuous Charlotte, this reminds me of a certain name sake of yours, a certain Miss Bronte. i'm sure she would had loved this too. harry

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 4:17:00 PM
    Well written etheree that fancifully describes the summer dawn awakening the flowers. Good write.

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 3:00:00 PM
    ok i'll compeat. the movie would sudjest is splash. i mean compeat in the contest

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 2:12:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one, jag

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 12:33:00 AM
    Great poem! I loved every line. The last line being the best. I predict a first place win! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 7:41:00 PM
    This is a wonderful poem Charlotte.Enjoyed very much.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 6:10:00 PM
    wow, a sexy nature poem. You are such a clever poetess, sweet lady!!! Linda will love it.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 4:20:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Sounds Completely & Joyfully Delicious ;-) What A Wonderful Way to Be Awakened Or To Awaken ˜ My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Charlotte * Love Always, John!:) ˜