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The 21 Guns Questionku

This heart is broke Nothing more to give Lord, should I let it be Losing my pride Nearly lost my faith Lord, why should it just be 21 guns And their bells tolling Lord, help me let it be The queen was dead Longer lived the rose Lord, what's in store for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/23/2013 1:33:00 PM
Loved the last stanza, especially. Enjoyed this one, too. Kudos! :)
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Date: 10/7/2013 8:33:00 AM
Outstanding!
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/7/2013 12:39:00 PM
Hi; Rick! Just thought of you and your success story , especially with "Dancing coins", together with Eileen! We shouldhave a big Poetry Soup Web Writers Party to celebrate all this! Hugs
Date: 10/3/2013 10:24:00 PM
these are very good. Profound ones.
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/4/2013 3:32:00 PM
Thank you for taking time reading my questionkus; your comments are very important to me! Blessings!
Date: 10/1/2013 3:47:00 PM
Reminds me of Madagascar- the movie!
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Date: 10/1/2013 3:44:00 PM
Poet with the shortest name, thank you for sharing your poetic thoughts.
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/1/2013 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Gerald (^_^), you can call me Hanitra!

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