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Thank you for a making my husband a prick
For 3 weeks of being treated like shit
Do you feel better, now that you’re PALS with him?
I’m sorry I didn’t realize you were so dim   
We could have continued flirting and joking
But then you apologized - what were you smoking? 
My husband didn’t care, until you made it seem “bad”
Why would you do that? Destroy the fun that we had?
Now I’m the “immoral, horrible wife”
Who daily is yelled at, ignored, criticized… 
The loving husband that I once used to have
Only speaks asshole thanks to your gaff!
I never thought you would BETRAY me like this – 
For goodness sake, we didn’t even kiss!
I hope you get herpes, you cock-sucking dick!

For Patricia's thank-you contest

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:38:00 AM
    SUSAN, a nice little win, in the SKAT' contest... xox~ Always & Forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 2:27:00 PM
    Whewww...Now THIS is a poem with real attitude! You did NOT mince words here...VERY powerful stuff and congrats, my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Susan, Big congrats, you deserved a high win with this one. Luv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 12:50:00 PM
    Susan, LOL, Congratulations with your poem. thank you for supporting my latest contest. You really took the cake with this one. LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:41:00 PM
    Susan' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:10:00 PM
    HI SUAN, thank you for giving me the second chance in viewing this one for my contest...CONGRATULATIONS!!! Always & Forever ;-) LINDA

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:11:00 AM
    Haha you use words I wouldnt dare, or maybe i would now. hmmm they even stopped me using b itch. Am still laughing. Seren

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 8:55:00 AM
    LOL. I'm so glad you pointed me to this. Just going to read "Your Canvas" now. Great work!

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:05:00 AM
    huwahahahaa, whewww, Susan. interesting shout out poem here, sounds like you are the real victim. Great one :)

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 10:10:00 PM
    hahaha, what a mouth on you, sweetie pie. This rocks. I can really feel how steamed it made you feel!! Gosh, i wonder if Michael will put it thru with the full frontal vulgarity. hahaha. No matter, I really enjoyed this. soupmail.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 12:22:00 PM
    Holy commoly!! I wouldn`t betray you,dear Susan!:-) OMG..oh well..lovely name calling here.LOL,my friend Michael will need a CPR after this entry!

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 11:14:00 AM
    What the??? Wow! Wow! That's an eye opener! Ha,ha. Nice!

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 10:44:00 AM
    whooa, really raring to exhale, susan.. a defining, fearless write.. you go and jig; meaning do a wild or racy dance... a winning bet!..) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:45:00 AM
    Thank you Susan for the thought on nette's contest.. :-P wow... This poem reminds me of a guy name J_____,, all I got to say is how could he. Sweetly your life will go on, and hopefully he does get herpes where the sun don't shine...LOL always~ pd

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 7:54:00 AM
    What an outstanding write my friend! You put a lot of feeling deep into this poem, full of hatred or disappointment, and full of grief! I see where you placed your blame in this contest, but it could shift from time to time! What a spectacular poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 7:27:00 AM
    wow powerful poem on betrayal Susan, hope it is not true, but a interesting read and very profound.........