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Tell Me My Soul

Oh you moving power within me, That wise soul you are called, Tell me- your body- I beseech you Why have you chosen me as your Sanctuary When my weaknesses to you, too Well were known? © Demetrios Trifiatis 11 OCTOBER 2014

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Gary Bateman

Date: 10/12/2014 2:18:00 PM

Demetrios, Excellent write mein guter Freund!! The "weakness" aspect is something that makes us all members of the human race. Sometimes when each of us are tested in certain situations, an inherent knowledge of individual weaknesses can help us to rally ourselves with our strengths to do amazing things. Show me someone without a weakness and I would say that "person" is probably not Human and is certainly lying (my opinion). A "7" from me Sir for this poem. Cheers, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/13/2014 5:10:00 AM

Es ist die warheit, mein freund, Gary! This true my friend, Gary! Thank you,for your heartfelt comment and grading! I appreciate it!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/11/2014 12:07:00 PM

Who is without weakness, my dear poet. Your wisdom is one of your finest qualities. I'm glad wisdom has found a home in you. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/11/2014 12:36:00 PM

What a marvelous comment! I wish I deserved that! Thank you so much, dear Eileen!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/11/2014 11:21:00 AM

your poetry inspiring to all that read them,,maybe that's the reason your soul your sanctuary,,powerful is this,,i like...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/11/2014 11:38:00 AM

My good friend, Harry, long time didn't see! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting in such a superb for me way!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2014 10:58:00 AM

Dear Demetrios, I have no doubt that wisdom can be a sanctuary for you. Your weaknesses, though, are still a mystery. A beautiful poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/11/2014 11:07:00 AM

Carolyn, my dear friend, Thank you for your precious visit and comment!

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/11/2014 8:06:00 AM

This is deep and powerful! I enjoyed reading your pondering this morning. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/11/2014 8:15:00 AM

Thank you, Kasarah, so nice to see you again!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/11/2014 4:09:00 AM

Your poem reminds me of moses and and God.Moses could never understand why He was God's chosen one when He stammered as He spoke.God chose those with hearts so humble,and that is why He chosen you.This is what I believe with heart and soul .A beautiful poem !

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/11/2014 4:39:00 AM

My good friend, Charmaine, your comment humbles me beyond measure! I have to be careful here not to be taken as a blasphemer. Thank you so much for your noble comment!

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 10/11/2014 3:09:00 AM

Hi dear Demetrios, you are so wise hence a haven for a beautiful soul. Keep well my dearest friend, alofas Tiaua.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/11/2014 3:59:00 AM

My good friend, Tiaua, how happy am I to receive your visit and to read your superb comment! Thank you, many alofas!

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/11/2014 1:11:00 AM

We'll were known....yes true.Fine work.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/11/2014 4:00:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Muhammad for your kind visit and comment!