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Teasing Threads of Thought

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Teasing Threads of Thought

My mind is a jumble of thoughts today....

 like a million pieces of thread all twisted up in a ball
 tangled beyond hope of finding release
 Colorful ends dangling here and there

 Teasing .... Pull here! Pull here!
 A jester laughs .... in a court of no hope.

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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 2:24:00 PM
    Past and present connected by colorful thread, who knows what we will find connected to the other end??? I love this idea, very creative.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:32:00 AM
    A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Debra. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 8:54:00 PM
    Congrats on your first place win Debra. It is truly a glimpse into a poets dry spell. Cobwebs and all.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Awesome write on this poem Debra. Congrats on your big win. love phyl

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:25:00 AM
    Love this!! Congrats on another fantastic win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 7:26:00 PM
    what a marvelous itty bitty poem this is. Big congrats for your high placed win, Debra.

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 12:46:00 PM
    :-) I can relate to this. Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 9:39:00 AM
    Thank you Debra for your tapestry of feelings and what colors your world, congrats on this superb write, love and peace, Vienna.

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:17:00 AM
    Congratulations Debra xx

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 11:15:00 PM
    congrats Debbie.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 9:51:00 AM
    This is deep!..I love it..congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 5:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Debra. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:21:00 AM
    Like your teasing threads of thought,Debra.My mind is always a jumble of thoughts:) Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:07:00 AM
    ‡ Well That's A Pretty Gray In Somber's Court, Sweet Beautiful Lady * Aside From This Observation Its Seems, This, Is Quite An Excellent Poem Brushed Amid Depthful & Wonderful Images; Kudos ... My Luv, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:13:00 AM
    A glimpse, a glimmer, a shadow of doubt. This is what living is all about. To enter tomorrow, we must live today. To end all the sorrow and catch the sun's rays.