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Teasing Threads of Thought

My mind is a jumble of thoughts today.... like a million pieces of thread all twisted up in a ball tangled beyond hope of finding release Colorful ends dangling here and there Teasing .... Pull here! Pull here! A jester laughs .... in a court of no hope.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/17/2012 2:24:00 PM

Past and present connected by colorful thread, who knows what we will find connected to the other end??? I love this idea, very creative.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2012 10:32:00 AM

A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Debra. Love, Carol

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/6/2012 8:54:00 PM

Congrats on your first place win Debra. It is truly a glimpse into a poets dry spell. Cobwebs and all.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/5/2012 1:37:00 PM

Awesome write on this poem Debra. Congrats on your big win. love phyl

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/5/2012 11:25:00 AM

Love this!! Congrats on another fantastic win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2012 7:26:00 PM

what a marvelous itty bitty poem this is. Big congrats for your high placed win, Debra.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/3/2012 8:17:00 AM

Congratulations Debra xx

Sherese Gooden

Date: 8/2/2012 11:15:00 PM

congrats Debbie.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/2/2012 9:51:00 AM

This is deep!..I love it..congrats on your win. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2012 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Debra. Love, Carol

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/31/2012 11:07:00 AM

‡ Well That's A Pretty Gray In Somber's Court, Sweet Beautiful Lady * Aside From This Observation Its Seems, This, Is Quite An Excellent Poem Brushed Amid Depthful & Wonderful Images; Kudos ... My Luv, Rachel ‡

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/31/2012 9:13:00 AM

A glimpse, a glimmer, a shadow of doubt. This is what living is all about. To enter tomorrow, we must live today. To end all the sorrow and catch the sun's rays.