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Tears Are Written Down

I'll "leave You my tears" I'll leave You all fears Let You hold heartaches awhile As the fog surrounds And the trees are crowned My tears are captured in style Bottled in heaven In Your book reckon My tears are contained Let the sad tears flow Tears of joy are stowed All tears written ascertained
Sponsor: Gautami Phookan Contest: The Past II Theme: "Leave You My Tears" Author: Sara Kendrick Written: September 06, 2014 Psalms 56: 8 and II Kings 20:5 Form used: Alouette

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Date: 9/15/2014 2:16:00 AM
Sara Congrats!!!! I loved your poem, it's so well crafted and beautiful imagery, love you..Pray for you!
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Date: 9/14/2014 10:53:00 PM
Well penned poem, congrats on the win, sara
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:11:00 PM
Stopping back to congratulate you on winning with this lovely poem.
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Date: 9/14/2014 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations Sara. Well done. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:49:00 PM
Beautifully penned many congrats Sara:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2014 10:24:00 AM
Nicely done:) love your 2 nd stanza more :) GBU
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Date: 9/9/2014 12:52:00 PM
Lovely poem with such a nice flow Sara. It's beautiful. Hope you are doing better.
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Date: 9/8/2014 5:11:00 PM
tears are truly a gift beautifully penned piece
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Date: 9/8/2014 11:32:00 AM
love the poem and the creativeness Sara,,and wow it does go so well contained within a alouette form
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Date: 9/8/2014 7:39:00 AM
Oh my Sara, what a gem THIS is! 'Bottled in heaven?' WOW...
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Date: 9/8/2014 7:14:00 AM
-.... Life is a Bridge of Sighs across a river of tears .... but, do not cry more - Touching beautiful, Sara - Good luck in the contest - Have a beautiful autumn day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2014 5:26:00 AM
Delightfully painful! Beautifully written, dear Sara! Good luck!
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Date: 9/8/2014 4:22:00 AM
Excellent. As usual a great piece of writing. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 9/6/2014 11:22:00 PM
hmmm you are just so busy creating these days!! You have beat me to this contest too. How nice to see you used the Alouette form, Sara.
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Date: 9/6/2014 2:46:00 PM
ohh my, sara.... writing down the bones.. so emotive and poignant.. I like the whole mood of your piece.. huggs
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Date: 9/6/2014 11:45:00 AM
Wow Sara that's a great write ,, n the form itself is adding to its beauty! Gl in contest!
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