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Teardrop

I ask you to mind our earth, heed our existence upon it, care for our lives and all that will occur if we cannot consider beyond ourselves, if we are guided by uncertainty, when we fear the unknown, when we shun those who differ from us in skin color, in sex, in persuasion, if we turn our eyes away, when we dance upon the hidden strings of politicians or cunning puppetmasters, when we swallow the lust of war, when poets languish in isolation, without ear or encouragement, when we torture, when prejudice blinds us to the humanity of another, when our deluded misconceptions will go public with ready trigger finger, when we mistake violence for the solution, when we fail the worthy person, when we won't bother to look past the wheelchair and to whom he really is, to say his real name, when the most expected thing we will share with him is discrimination, when we forget that here in space we are in this together, when tomorrow is the day that old and young will die in roaring explosions, in quiet corners without notice, when people are driven from their homes, when women must live in fear, when we steal identities, when evil hides in anonymity, when we rest in apathy, indifferent to the pain of others, when our fellow creatures are in chains for our profit and amusement, when hunger and hatred are accepted, when malice shrieks loud, when we cut baby girls due to generational gender inequality, from psychosexual ignorance and hard superstition; when we deny justice to one lonely voice, our world falls, stretching itself into a teardrop.
December 26, 2016 For FJ Thomas's contest - 'Concrete Crush'

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Date: 4/8/2018 1:32:00 PM
Such depth, pain, and wisdom. ...a piece I still appreciate Doug :)
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Date: 3/6/2018 9:47:00 PM
This is perfect in shape and content Doug :)
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Date: 1/1/2018 5:45:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem.
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Date: 4/19/2017 7:21:00 PM
Wow!! This is excellent! Masterfully crafted for tongue and eye :) I believe there is a day when the tears will stop.
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Date: 4/20/2017 11:37:00 AM
Would be a mighty good one, Chris. : )
Date: 3/19/2017 12:33:00 AM
In a word ' Awesome ' Powerful words and the teardrop is just brilliant
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Doug Vinson
Date: 3/19/2017 12:50:00 AM
Hey Maria - I really appreciate that. Yeah, our world...
Date: 3/1/2017 8:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win. An masterfl melding of form and content.
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Date: 3/19/2017 12:49:00 AM
Hi Dave - cheers, man. : )
Date: 2/26/2017 2:48:00 AM
Nicely written and on the winners list as well :)
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Doug Vinson
Date: 2/26/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Debbie. Had to keep beating on it with a hammer to get the shape.
Date: 2/5/2017 3:52:00 PM
Pleased to be back with merited congratulations, Doug...well done! // paul
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Date: 2/6/2017 7:08:00 AM
Aw! Habib! Thank you, Paul.
Date: 2/5/2017 1:28:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Doug I'm delighted to see this on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2017 7:06:00 AM
: ) Jan. Shoh Slaynt!
Date: 2/4/2017 11:34:00 AM
I'm really happy to see your name on the winners list Doug :) Congratulations!
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Date: 2/5/2017 10:31:00 AM
Cheers, Brother. : )
Date: 2/3/2017 4:16:00 PM
Doug, congratulations on your win awesome write. Hugs
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Doug Vinson
Date: 2/5/2017 10:32:00 AM
Hey Eve. : ) Gracias!
Date: 1/22/2017 7:50:00 AM
A very powerful poem, Doug... so true.. brillantly written - hugs
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Date: 1/22/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thanks, Claudia. There are some big questions - how do we deal with our own pain; how do we deal with all the pain in the world?
Date: 1/14/2017 3:21:00 PM
Very deep I luv it
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Date: 1/18/2017 8:07:00 AM
Hi Chadona. Thank you. : )
Date: 1/11/2017 7:26:00 AM
Impressive! Certainly makes an instant impact upon viewing, Doug...The content and sentiment are very good too. Extremely well done! All my best - Cheers! :) john
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Date: 1/12/2017 5:38:00 PM
Ahoy, John. Thanks! : )
Date: 1/9/2017 8:55:00 PM
Amazing work Doug, must have taken a lot of time!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 1/10/2017 3:46:00 PM
Hey John. : ) Yes, getting the right line length was a thing...
Date: 1/7/2017 1:08:00 PM
Well done!
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Date: 1/9/2017 7:00:00 AM
Hi Rico. I'm glad you like it. : )
Date: 1/6/2017 6:10:00 PM
Perfect poem for the teardrop form Doug I REALLY like what you did here:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/6/2017 11:34:00 PM
Hey Jan, thanks! Once again I think about how sadness seems to be easier to write about than happiness. "Happiness" can too easily become sappy or maudlin, or is that just a sad way to view things?
Date: 1/4/2017 7:31:00 AM
Doug, this is so inspirational & moving, teardrops for me are a genuine symbol of hope. Your words here capture so many different emotions in a sometimes very sad and lonely world. Loneliness is an isolation hidden behind a smile :)
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Date: 1/4/2017 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, Janet. : ) Teardrops are just cool as heck - like the perfect sphere of a water droplet combined with gravity.
Date: 1/1/2017 10:18:00 AM
Doug, I am so impressed by the message within your creative teardrop. It's a message that should be read every day of the year. My brother is in a wheelchair now and the truth squares even more strongly with where I am. This is definitely a 7. Kathy
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Doug Vinson
Date: 1/4/2017 12:59:00 PM
Thanks, Kathleen. There are some hard truths about our world, and about our nature, overall.
Date: 12/31/2016 12:23:00 AM
I cry with you. I've seen too much of what you describe... I cry... But I wish you good luck, 7 and fav. Because it's so incredibly good!
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Date: 12/31/2016 12:38:00 AM
Oh Darren. There is an ocean for me, and it is the sea of pain that is always out there. Not like I'm just a receiver/observer, for I've done evil myself. Main thing I can say is that I've gotten better as I've gotten older (and honestly, that could be a pretty faint thing). To think of the evil in the world - people have written books about this.
Date: 12/30/2016 8:54:00 PM
KUDOS GOOD LUCK
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/31/2016 12:33:00 AM
Hey Donna. : ) We will see what happens, as we always do. Meanwhile, keep writing, and welcome to PoetrySoup!
Date: 12/29/2016 2:24:00 PM
A solid 7! The flow is smooth and every line is a monster quake. Beautiful piece Doug
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Date: 12/31/2016 12:31:00 AM
Kunda, thank you - that means a lot to me. You are a true poet.
Date: 12/29/2016 7:23:00 AM
- A perfect shape in a wonderful poem, Doug - Good luck in the contest - thanks for the year 2016 ... looking forward to a new year with new poems and friendship - Best wishes for a happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/29/2016 12:03:00 PM
Oh Anne-Lise, that is so nice. : ) Best wishes, indeed!
Date: 12/28/2016 4:06:00 PM
this is where content and visual language meet.. how wonderful, doug..huggs
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/28/2016 8:55:00 PM
(((Nette))) Soul Sister to so many - or at least we dream of that. :)
Date: 12/28/2016 6:32:00 AM
This poem of yours is very hard-hitting and inspirational. A 7
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/28/2016 11:29:00 AM
Thanks, Afzal. Not like a maze with no exit, I hope.
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