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Tangled Vines

We planted pumpkin seeds And placed the pot on the window sill We watched as tiny shoots appeared Enjoyed seeing them grow And re-potted them outside Leaves, vines and orange-yellow flowers We wonder when we shall see pumpkins And look forward to the first fruit… …And then others Growing together on tangled vines They will develop and thrive Despite slugs and snails and caterpillars Just like us as we strive to survive Bound by an invisible cord that can never be cut For Constance's Tangled Vines contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/6/2013 8:16:00 PM
Love the whole poem but especially the last stanza, Jack... A definite winner to me! x Always, Annalise
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Date: 7/5/2013 7:49:00 AM
Beautiful Jack, you really chose an unique approach with this one.. All the best for the contest :) xx Wilma
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Date: 7/1/2013 7:50:00 AM
way to go with your poem on tangled vines. I don't even know enough about vines to know how to do this contest but I think I will research it just to get some ideas. How are you today? I hope I sent you a reply to your last email. Let me know if I didn't. Been so busy this weekend but now I have free time for Soup this morning. YAYYY
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Date: 6/30/2013 9:10:00 PM
A great write on this one Jack. I thought about entering but my thoughts kept going towards the inner tangles vines of our lives. Somehow it just wasn't coming together for me. Good luck in the contest. I am feeling good and thank you for thinking of me. love phyl
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Date: 6/30/2013 7:44:00 PM
Jack, thank you for the nice hi. wishing you luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3
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Date: 6/30/2013 11:13:00 AM
This is splendidly arranged, I can see the whole scene unfolding in my sensitive eye. .. lovely, jack!..:)
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Date: 6/30/2013 8:00:00 AM
Yes, that invisible cord of life. Enjoyed this one so much, Jack. Fine imagination here. Love, daver
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Date: 6/29/2013 7:57:00 PM
This is a very clever write my friend! I love how you put this poem together, a grand piece this one truly is Jack! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/29/2013 6:16:00 PM
Jack this is great, and a little wisdom at the end. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/29/2013 6:03:00 PM
That pumpkin plant worked its way around into getting in your poem that reads like a winner to me...Enjoyed reading the poem..Great topic..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara
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