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Taking it all in

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Taking it all in

Taking it all in

Words are often full of deception,
Only actions, shows true reflection.

Wanting ease, shaking knees,
Coward less,  for all to see.

Cravings we all must taste,
Empty tears of rivers to waste.

A glimpse of what's unforeseen,
Tell me, who will intervene?

We're in control,
Limitations we all must hold.

Standing still, we watch it fade, 
Mistakes we all have made.

Movements veering,
Outward steering.

Millions of miles from a single touch,
To realize, we've already lost so much.

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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 4:39:00 PM
    There is a lot to soak in here, well done and enjoyable write.

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    Date: 1/18/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard Lamoureux. I'm happy you enjoyed your read! :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:04:00 AM
    Very good my friend... you are a true poet,,, Michael

    Mistress Avatar Dark Mistress
    Date: 11/13/2012 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Michael J. Falotico: Thank you. Those are some kind words. Much appreciated. I am happy you enjoyed it. Cheers! Dark_Mistress (Aka, Manon)
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 9:29:00 AM
    Hi Rachel St.Cross: Thanks for the inspiring words & the conviction behind what you have taken from my poem & style of writing. Cheers! Dark_Mistress