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Take my hand

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Take my hand


Take My Hand.

Oh take my hand and let us take a trip
We’ll climb aboard that mystic, magic ship
We’ll float within a soft and formless haze
 And the Gods of darker times we will erase.

We’ll see rich colors strong in their allure
And sound will echo clear, and very pure
And Pan will certify our very being
As life in mystery we will be seeing.

So many stars will fill the mystic eye
And death the way we see it, it will die
The truth in all its splendor will appear
Like a phoenix it will rise above all fear.

We’ll look and laugh and dance within the fire
And watch those curtains falling on desires
We’ll swim within the hazy face of God
And recognize the path that must be trod.

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  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:01:00 PM
    Just lovely...you are so good at rhyming. BG

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 12/14/2013 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Barbara, your comments are very much appreciated....peter
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 3:52:00 PM
    Thank you so much Vincent, as usual you are very kind with your comments...Peter

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 3:49:00 PM
    Great write Peter. I must say very beautiful. I think we need an "8" rating for you. Always a joy to read!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 12/14/2013 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Vincent. I appreciate....peter