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Take Me To a Place!

Take Me To A Place! Take me to a place where angels and fairies fly with great might across fields and prairies A place filled with roses and tulips and flowers where fields are watered with diamond showers A place where horses fly high across the rainbow where all the magic fruits and talking trees grow Where animals and people all speak the same tongue where there's no riot or hunting or no one with a frown Where there's always peace in a place filled with color where there's a merry tune played always and forever.

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Date: 3/11/2009 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:29:00 AM
Some days we all want to be in that place. Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:11:00 AM
One of the reasons I love Disney World. This place sounds magical too. Congratulations Maryam on "Take Me To A Place!" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/9/2009 4:31:00 PM
I want to go to this enchanted place. It sounds so wonderful and peaceful. Congratulations on being featured it is definately well deserved. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/9/2009 3:53:00 PM
I'd want to go to that place too except for the music all the time ... LOL ... as a lover of silence I could really get into the rest of your wonderful world ... Congratulations on your writing being featured this week here at PoetrySoup, Maryam!
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:21:00 PM
Very nice magical place Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:21:00 PM
congrats...I learned I was featured today and many poets wrote me to congraululate me...I thought it was so sweet..sfo I am doing it too. Liked your poem, I want to find that place. cat
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful write being featured this week, Maryam! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/9/2009 12:39:00 PM
Sounds like a good place to me. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/9/2009 10:55:00 AM
Maryam - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:16:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I wanna go too. ;) Congrats on your lovely and inspiring poetry being featured this week, well-deserved. Love, Amy :)
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/8/2009 10:09:00 PM
Maryam - very uplifting and beautiful - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/3/2009 4:24:00 PM
really cool poem. just like another one of your poems this reminded me of a song. (dispatch- flying horses) great write
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Date: 12/31/2008 4:27:00 PM
Excellent poem, Maryam! The imagery is great and reading it gives you a happy, uplifting feeling. Happy New Year! Love, Robin
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Date: 12/10/2008 9:10:00 AM
Aww this is really sweet :)
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