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Take Me Back

Oh take me back . . . take me back to a simpler time to a simpler place where we floated on clouds held our heads proud and life had a much slower pace oh take me back to a peaceful time not filled with hate where we chased butterfly dreams through meadows, past streams and your kisses were sugary sweet oh take me back to our start with wishes on stars where futures were far troubles set free and that love in your eyes I could see Oh take me back to a place that I truly miss where hearts beat as one where hands were held close I was the one you chose as we disappeared into the late setting sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/17/2015 5:35:00 PM
Oh ... I hope so too
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Date: 10/30/2015 7:39:00 AM
This is lovely and great! I miss your work my dear poet. Refreshing... so refreshing!!
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Date: 10/23/2015 1:39:00 AM
Tim John said it better than I could. Johns comments are my exact feelings. Congratulations on this wonderful write.
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Date: 10/22/2015 8:36:00 AM
Oh how so romantic and a sense to belong once again. Very very deep.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/22/2015 8:37:00 AM
A fave
Date: 10/22/2015 2:37:00 AM
What a delightful dream! Yes, your heart can take you anywhere you wish, dear Tim, if only is filled with pure, unadulterated love! Wonderfully written, soft and romantic. A seven!
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Date: 10/22/2015 12:44:00 AM
there is no going back, Tim. Because it is a part of youth! Anyway, it's a beautiful poem!
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Date: 10/21/2015 11:53:00 PM
- Really beautiful poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2015 9:12:00 PM
The rush of live kind of dilutes suttle meaningful moments, the little things that matter...enjoyed reading this :)
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Date: 10/21/2015 6:39:00 PM
Love this plea of love... Wonderful write.. a 7
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