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Swept Away Beautiful

A painter of expressions begins stroking deeply gold threaded feelings in the warm silken soft tenderness weaving emotions touching sweetly kisses laying them deep inside love treasured within one thousand dreams Your voice calls to me sweetly underneath velvet satin darkness catching a shining star dazzling sparks behind the curtains gifting one wish in your light upon a trail of dust sprinkling silver magically cast under your spell All wishes landed on perfect the very day we met darling enchanting magic flowers singing waltzing butterflies dance spinning around the soul's heart and beauty adoring you love forever one lifetime with a dream

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Sharmila Shankar

Date: 9/29/2014 4:20:00 AM

Written wonderfully. :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 4:28:00 AM

this comment touched deeply thank you kindly bless you

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/23/2014 8:50:00 AM

Beautiful, exquisite piece! Ooh I love it! Pandita

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 10:41:00 AM

thank you ever so kindly for such an amazing comment bless you

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/28/2014 5:01:00 PM

Ow those waltzing butterflies and dancing flowers..What beauty to our hearts..you have crafted dear.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/27/2014 11:50:00 PM

Beautifully written Liam... Nothing more beautiful a sweet dream that is real... Verlena

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/27/2014 12:57:00 PM

this an excellent poem. i am so glad i had the opportunity to read it.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/27/2014 11:31:00 AM

It is so easy to sweep your love away with writings like this one, Liam...gentle and romantic; may these feelings last for years to come. Loved the imagery! // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/27/2014 8:29:00 AM

A man writing with such tenderness possesses a loving soul! Excellent parade of expressions that dazzles the mind! A seven!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/27/2014 7:23:00 AM

ah love such an eternally misunderstood emotion, with such power, even the ugly become beautiful in the eyes of someone who knows love. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2014 4:15:00 AM

- Liam a lovely poem ! - A life without dreams, goals, joy and hope, is an empty and sad life. - Dream your dreams :) - I wish you a nice day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/24/2014 11:28:00 PM

Oh this is deliciously sweet, Liam. One of your best, my dear. Enchanting! Hugs