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SWEET LICKER

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SWEET LICKER

Its sweet, it’s a mocker, it’s a brawler
Its wrath is like a roaring lion	
Wars that bound from sweet licker come from
Desires for pleasure.
You were rich, now you weep and howl for your
Miseries coming upon you
The licker is fire that burns the heart
For can a man walk on hot coal without his feet
Being scorched? that is sweet licker the aftermath.
It causes their tongue to mutter wicked things
And rely on empty arguments….

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  1. Date: 9/16/2014 2:35:00 AM
    That is quite a piece to ponder about.... I love it! ^_^

    Kimathi Avatar Teddy Kimathi
    Date: 9/17/2014 2:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol. A some people in fact being addicted to the one that makes them blind.
    odaga Avatar charlene odaga
    Date: 9/16/2014 5:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Kwanza us being a drinking nation
  1. Date: 6/2/2014 3:52:00 AM
    wohohohow!!! that's a challenging write friend.. and it gives two reflections for me.. :) awesome! God bless you :) I hope you will write more. and that you will enjoy your stay here as much I as I have enjoyed.. :)

    odaga Avatar charlene odaga
    Date: 8/16/2014 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yess deaar thnkyuu,,i love it here
  1. Date: 4/6/2013 9:52:00 PM
    Charlene, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA