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Sweat Drops

Sweat drops and sea waves
Are salty alike :
Manifestations of agility.

Pure drops fall down
From the forehead of labour,
But lazy man and the corpse never sweat.

Sweat drops are seen on all races;
Rays of victory shine on the drops,
Creating the rainbows in minds.

Mountaineers mount up
In the blue moonlight,
And get down in sweat drops.

Seeds sprout
In each fallen drop in field :
Sweat drops are life drops.

Sweat stream 
Floats failures away,
Depositing fresh joys on the shore.


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  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:53:00 AM
    I like this poem Fabiyas !!!oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 11:15:00 AM
    Happy New year, my friend, 2012. Nice one enjoyed. bl

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 7:30:00 AM
    I like this piece quite a bit. Very nice :)

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 9:39:00 PM
    I liked the idea you gave of those things in nature that "work" or provide something to the earth are those that sweat. I am a "sweater" (not the kind you wear. haha) So I should be proud of my condition! that was funny about the lazy man and the corpse never sweating!

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 3:14:00 AM
    naturally and scientifically corpses sweat.

    M V Avatar FABIYAS M V
    Date: 11/28/2011 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Honesty,I don't know how you got this foolish idea.The corpses are dead bodies, which are frozen and cool.These will never sweat, but will decay.I have seen many corpses closely.I have even washed the corpse.I talked about it with experts in the field.They were chuckling about your idea.
  1. Date: 11/14/2011 8:49:00 AM
    And one must work to live life....great analogy on beads of sweat....enjoyed...I 've still got that child in the wheelchair stuck in my mind...:) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 9:57:00 AM
    What a very unique insight you've put here, Fab :) Enjoyed what you say here, "sweat drops are life drops" so true! and thanks for passing by my poem :D

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:05:00 PM
    a beautiful piece about life... 'Sweat drops are life drops.' congrats on the win Fabiyas :)

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 1:52:00 PM
    line 6 I think you wants [corpses] but those who are lazy or corpses never sweat..lots of syntax and verb tense issues here my friend. light & love

    M V Avatar FABIYAS M V
    Date: 11/10/2011 7:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry, Debbie.I don't find any need to revise any line.If it was an essay,I would certainly have followed you.To describe is to destroy.Please note that here in India we follow British English.Thank you for reading my poem
  1. Date: 11/7/2011 1:51:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem You Posted this Week"contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 9:22:00 AM
    Congrats, Fab. Excellent piece. Nice going. Best to you and yours. Ralph

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 9:11:00 PM
    FAB ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 8:49:00 PM
    Congratulation for win. Thanks, bl

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 5:10:00 PM
    Congrats Fabiyas on another amazing win luv.. your words are always super awesome my friend..

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 8:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in PD's contest Fabiyas

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 12:39:00 PM
    Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Fabiyas. I enjoyed reading yours today. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 9:44:00 AM
    Smile, *^_^* “I Was Left In Part Reflecting Upon `The Son of Man` & Sweat As Drops of Blood & The Verse, `You Have Not Yet Resisted Unto Blood The Striving Against Sin` My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Friend Fab! * Yet, I Love Depth & I Truly Love Your Beauties Last Stanza *^_^* Without Hopes & Dreams & Love In Sweat, If Need Be Then, We Have Nothing * Very Beautiful My Dear!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 10/26/2011 4:35:00 PM
    the last two stanzas are great Fabiyas...and in the last there is much wisdom. Thank you for your comment