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Swan Song

A frequent visitor is Mary Anne, Who first did come before the bloom of rose As tiny bud before it fully grows. I blossomed too. A pattern then began. I came to know when she would call again. Though first she came as not a guest I chose, I'm ready now each time she does impose herself on me, and that has been the plan. She comes. She goes. Late summer has drawn near. I backward look. How every year did flee! I forward look with something kin to fear. I think that it a sorry day shall be (A time I know is very nearly here) When Mary Anne no longer calls on me. (an oldie written some time before "Mary Anne" left me forever! Seeing PD's blog the other day made me think of it! If you are still confused, here is a big hint: She only visits women!!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/18/2012 7:11:00 PM
Hi, Andrea. I dropped by to say thank you so much again for all the inspirational comments especially in my latest experimented form of poem, diamante. Great poets, especially like you and PD are giving me encouragement and inspiration to go on and keep on writing. I'm learning a lot from you and all of your here. Million thanks. Have a blessed and wonderful weekend to you and your family. luv, leonora
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Date: 8/4/2012 9:57:00 PM
okay,,, me and Nathan. are still together, but he has a smoking problem.. which makes him slack alot... i think.. it slows me down.. I'm really an active person... you see lately all i do is eat sleep and eat... and ignore all the things i use to do,,, :-(
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Date: 8/4/2012 9:55:00 PM
I don't know Andrea... my problems here are really getting in my way of life.. and it is funny..i'm avoiding them all...lol..
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:20:00 PM
Ahhh, I understand now, lol - I had to read it twice...
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Date: 7/13/2012 11:36:00 AM
I had to smile at Kash's comment. cute. love phyl
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Date: 7/13/2012 8:39:00 AM
sorry date? I don't think so.
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Date: 7/11/2012 7:46:00 AM
I am so happy I was able to read your poetry today Andrea and I understand what you are talking about. Thank you for sharing your writing with us always. So many diverse poems here and always a pleasure to read. Hoping you will continue to find the inspiration to write. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:07:00 PM
Yeah....tic tac toe....tic tac toe......tic tac toe....
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:06:00 PM
you turned this reaction out' beautiful'
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Date: 7/10/2012 6:01:00 PM
once i knew what you were talking about (thanks for the hint!), i really enjoyed this poem and can totally relate, although i have to admit that i wasn't sorry at all when mary anne left for good. she served her purpose but i don't miss her at all!
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Date: 7/10/2012 4:58:00 PM
She was your spinster aunt, Andrea? We knew someone by that name, she could crack your ribs with one mastodon hug! But still she was a kind soul. I'm not so sure about your's though! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 7/10/2012 2:02:00 PM
A quality write my friend, I do understand what this is referring to, and yeah, I don't have that! Your poem is very well written Andrea, I really enjoyed it! A very subtle write! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/10/2012 1:32:00 PM
And so the course of life goes on to find the sun in a new dawn. Those little friends will come and go. And hopefully no one will know. :)
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:07:00 AM
aww...sad one. I hope she visits you for many years to come :)
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:00:00 AM
A sonnet truly worthy of the name. I like this one very much. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/10/2012 7:56:00 AM
I am not sure who Mary Anne is...I am wondering ???...Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by...Your presence is always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 7/10/2012 7:37:00 AM
A lovely, lovely write, Andrea! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/10/2012 4:30:00 AM
Andrea a fine lament...David
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Date: 7/10/2012 2:00:00 AM
A heartfelt poem here by you.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/10/2012 8:08:00 PM
you chose wisely your words, not knowing what I was talking about!
Date: 7/10/2012 1:55:00 AM
Yeah!!!First here!
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