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Surreal Nature

The woods welcome me, listening to the silence of nature, waiting for the raucous sound as I disturb the sleeping inhabitants, smiling as through the early mist I spy the bewildered eyes of the tree inhabitants as they hold on tightly to the swaying branches that a squall  has caused. Looking down through squinted eyes I carefully place each shoe, trying not to destroy natures carpet, grass wet, with glistening  morning dew, a bathroom for all insects, and a water fountain for many.  Mice run hither and thither  wary of the birds of prey waiting to swoop from the branches above, they are looking for not wanting to be breakfast. pools of new morn dew ready to revitalise .... boosting energy I see nature as though in a dream a palette of natural colours, blending itself so not even the drab looks dull, the many shades spells nature at its best, mesmerising me, a visual collection of art for the taking. colours of living autumn shades announce deaths  knell ...... small shoots await spring. Penned 18 September 2013

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Date: 5/5/2014 7:12:00 AM
I'm glad i choose this one of yours to read this morning. what a beautiful collection of words it brought the scene to my eyes so perfectly!.
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Date: 10/25/2013 5:00:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/30/2013 2:34:00 AM
Thank you Sara
Date: 10/25/2013 1:13:00 PM
Hi poppet I'm back congrats on another win sweetie I don't know this form xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/30/2013 2:35:00 AM
Hi you will have to try it, lol.
Date: 10/25/2013 10:44:00 AM
Seren,, awesome Haibun. Have yourself a sweet day.......... LOVE SKAT .
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/30/2013 2:36:00 AM
Thank u
Date: 10/25/2013 9:54:00 AM
congratulations Seren...pd
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Date: 10/25/2013 7:40:00 AM
hi Seren congrats on a fine win Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/25/2013 5:02:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Seren
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Date: 10/24/2013 8:41:00 PM
you painted a picture as lovely as nature itself...congrats on your fine win :)
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Date: 10/24/2013 8:40:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Seren
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Date: 10/24/2013 8:34:00 PM
This is a truly beautiful write..........it "boosted my spirit" just as you mentioned boosting energy!! :)
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Date: 10/24/2013 6:08:00 PM
Fantastic work, congratulations.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/24/2013 6:51:00 PM
Hi Richard many thanks ..Seren
Date: 9/21/2013 10:10:00 AM
Wonderful, you show nature so vibrant and alive.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/21/2013 12:34:00 PM
Thanks again Monterey...Seren
Date: 9/21/2013 1:09:00 AM
Beautiful nature poem, Seren. Wow, I am seeing some amazing poems for this contest. I gotta get on the ball!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/21/2013 12:35:00 PM
Yea yea yea Andrea have heard that one before, bet you have something brilliant in the offing....Seren
Date: 9/20/2013 6:09:00 PM
beautifully penned haibun :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/21/2013 12:36:00 PM
Hi Sandra many thanks ... Seren
Date: 9/19/2013 7:34:00 PM
This is one of my least favorite forms, but you have someone managed to do magic here, very beautiful!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/19/2013 7:41:00 PM
Thank you, was my first attempt.
Date: 9/18/2013 12:20:00 AM
This is my favourite form though I have not written one. I am in search of a good prose, or write one so that I am write a Haibun. enjuoyed
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/21/2013 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Ram

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