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Superstar

Striking colored lights dazzle Her dynamic dance routines— Wearing stagehands to a frazzle Illuminating live scenes Spotlighting three tambourines. Her shimmering white tights cast Opalescence unforeseen Climaxing one last bright blast. Caryl Ramsdale Copyright © 2011 All rights reserved. Verse Poetry Form July 29, 2011 "HUTAIN THIS ONE..." poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud ~ 1st Place ~ 08/03/2011

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2011 12:54:00 AM

hmmm, maybe I have read all your poems by now. Did you take some of them down or did you never have many up? I sure hope to see many more, CAryl.

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/20/2011 10:57:00 AM

Andrea, Since my first appearance on PoetrySoup in 2006 I have had a habit of removing my posted poems annually and beginning anew by the first of every year. I'm taking down and organizing my collection of written works again this year as usual. Thanks for reading, commenting and asking my friend. Have a wonderful day. CR

Fabiyas M V

Date: 9/17/2011 10:15:00 AM

It's a nice poem,Caryl.I think this poem has won contest.Congratulations though belated!

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/20/2011 10:58:00 AM

Fabiyas, Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. CR

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/13/2011 12:17:00 PM

Dear fellow poet: Taking a time out while I organize my collection of poetry forms. Be back soon! CR

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/4/2011 8:06:00 PM

Excellent poem. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Lee

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/20/2011 10:59:00 AM

Thanks Lee. Have another creative day filled with blessings my friend. CR

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2011 1:25:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of nette, Caryl

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/20/2011 11:00:00 AM

Thank you again for leaving behind a comment my friend. Much appreciated. CR

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/4/2011 11:49:00 AM

congratulations on your 1st place win! you paint an exciting dance scene :)

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/20/2011 11:01:00 AM

Thanks Susan. Have a great day. CR

Jack Horne

Date: 8/4/2011 11:35:00 AM

Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/20/2011 11:02:00 AM

Jack, Your remarks are always appreciated. CR

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2011 9:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Nette's "Hutain" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 9/20/2011 11:03:00 AM

Thanks my friend. I appreciate your comments. CR

Tahera Mannan

Date: 8/4/2011 2:14:00 AM

An apt description of the picture made lovely by your words. Many congrats for this win Caryl

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 8/4/2011 2:58:00 AM

Thank you much! Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2011 11:24:00 PM

I KNEW this one would score big! Congratulations.

Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 8/4/2011 2:57:00 AM

You were right...but I didn't expect it. I was totally surprised. I guess I'm not a very good judge of my own works. Thanks for the kind comments. Caryl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/3/2011 8:00:00 PM

Congrad's on this romp of a win! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/3/2011 7:59:00 PM

Congrad's on this romp of a win! Light & Love

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 8/3/2011 6:45:00 PM

Caryl, congrats on your 1st place win with this verse. Enjoyed the read. Love Glenna

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/3/2011 6:38:00 PM

congrats on a superb 1st place write, very colourful and vivid...

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/3/2011 6:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Caryl....luv it...!!!!!

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 8/3/2011 3:59:00 PM

What ah original take of the photo ! Just wonderful. Congratulations on your well deserved big win, dear Caryl!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2011 2:48:00 PM

Congrats Caryl on your first place win with this prolific poetry luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/3/2011 2:06:00 PM

What a unique theme for your poem....outstanding work, and orginal subject matter!! Congratulations!!! ps...and thank you for your very kind comments, ...they always mean more to me than than I can ever say! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2011 1:03:00 AM

What a sparkling bedecked superstar she is! It's sure to please the eye of Nette!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/1/2011 10:45:00 PM

I wont to try this....it sounds interesting.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/29/2011 11:53:00 PM

Glad to see you back at the soup . Enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. Good luck in Nette's contest Caryl. love phyl