Sunshine

my melted minutes searing sunshine sultry stares torrid tropic tease ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry: Summer Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin July 3, 2022 (4)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2022 3:12:00 AM

Stunning alliteration included in this prize. Congrats. Way to go. Sara

Andy Chunn
Date: 7/8/2022 9:26:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words... and congratulation to you on your high finish. Nicely done

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2022 4:52:00 PM

Love the words of alliteration. Very nice. Congrats on the win

Andy Chunn
Date: 7/4/2022 9:56:00 PM

Thank you. I saw where you did very well indeed. Congratulations. Fun with words!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/4/2022 7:55:00 AM

Andy, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!

Andy Chunn
Date: 7/4/2022 9:56:00 PM

Thanks again for sponsoring the contest. It was fun. I loved reading the entries.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/4/2022 4:54:00 AM

Great alliteration. Congratulations!

Andy Chunn
Date: 7/4/2022 9:55:00 PM

Thank you and back at you. Nice finish in the contest!