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Sunsets In My Mind

the sun sets in my mind never to arise for darkness soothes the glaring light that carries all the lies and in the place where I sleep I come alive in my dreams never wishing to awake stitched in threads of reality seams so let the sun rise steadfast and so sublime just let me sleep so I can dream of sunsets in my mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/6/2014 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations Warner but I am saddened to think you must prefer such a world.
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Warner Baxter
Date: 9/6/2014 6:29:00 PM
Thank you Brenda, but it's just a poem, just a poem
Date: 9/6/2014 5:31:00 AM
Lovely poem on the sunset, congrats, Warner
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Warner Baxter
Date: 9/6/2014 6:32:00 PM
Sorry about the typo, Thank you Dr. Mehta
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Warner Baxter
Date: 9/6/2014 6:31:00 PM
T hank you Dr. Nehta
Date: 9/5/2014 7:39:00 PM
oh that is cool, I love the flow of it, and the ending, it was nice to read, grats on your win :)
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Warner Baxter
Date: 9/6/2014 6:35:00 PM
thank you Casarah
Date: 9/5/2014 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations, WARNER , 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA
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Warner Baxter
Date: 9/6/2014 6:34:00 PM
;)
Date: 7/23/2014 4:58:00 PM
Warner :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/23/2014 9:06:00 PM
you're welcome Linda and thanks once again. W.
Date: 7/22/2014 2:31:00 AM
Hello, Warner. Sometimes the darkness can feel more comfortable But to live there forever will deny growth and understanding of life. well written and I enjoyed it..... Robert.
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/23/2014 9:08:00 PM
Thank you Robert
Date: 7/10/2014 10:06:00 AM
Hello Warner, I enjoyed the reading of this poem, it has a great flow. I particularly was drowned in its meaning, (Interesting). The truth is always with us, we must face it without our eyes closed. I love this poem. A friend/Poet KJ
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/11/2014 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Ken, I am glad you enjoyed it
Date: 7/9/2014 12:08:00 AM
Warner, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/11/2014 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda
Date: 7/8/2014 3:08:00 PM
Oh I love this Warner. And you're right, sometimes it can feel easier to stay sleeping than face reality! Best wishes Kaye
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/11/2014 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Kaye, I am glad you liked it
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Ken Jordan
Date: 7/10/2014 10:17:00 AM
Hello Kaye, I Had to respond to your comment in a graceful way. What are you running from, or running towards, if you can't face reality? I have worked on myself enough to know that we are not in control. The truth is the light that will set us free. Poet KJ

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