Sunset

Drowsy day shuts eyes Glowing eyelids adorn sky Giggling stars appear! © Demetrios Trifiatis 26 OCTOBER 2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/28/2014 4:18:00 AM

a beautiful sunset demetrios excellent vision

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/31/2014 5:54:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Liam, for your lovely comment!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2014 4:50:00 PM

Hi Demi! Like the drowsy day I close my eyes and picture this lovely scene that you paint in so few words....like your friendly stars...I can see them as little happy babies! // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/27/2014 6:49:00 PM

Paul, thank you for your gracious visit and comment!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/26/2014 3:38:00 PM

I love how you have the stars giggling. I guess that explains why they twinkle. Another beautiful Haiku Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/27/2014 4:53:00 AM

That might be the reason, dear Brenda! The point is they are pretty and we giggle with them! Thank you for visiting and commenting!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/26/2014 11:55:00 AM

What great metaphors for night!! Love the giggling stars!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/27/2014 4:56:00 AM

What poetry would be without metaphors, dear Andrea! Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/26/2014 6:48:00 AM

Oh it's so beautiful Demetrios! Nature has so much to give us,, we just keep on cherishing n fail to appreciate! How selfish we r !! Thnx for sharing!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/27/2014 4:58:00 AM

Absolutely correct dear, Dr. Upma! We should appreciate and respect nature, otherwise, we would be for a great and unpleasant surprise as I say in my today's Haiku! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!

Earth Ancestor

Date: 10/26/2014 2:08:00 AM

Sunsets Are Always Beautiful! Thanks For Sharing!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2014 5:43:00 AM

Thank you dear, Earth Ancestor, for your visit and lovely comment! Welcome!