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Sunset

SUNSET The yawning sun Exhausted glides across the canvas of the infinite hues sky Painting in its passage, with the reminiscences of the day, A glorious resting place for the night to pass! © Demetrios Trifiatis 26 SEPTEMBER 2013

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Jack Ellison

Date: 9/26/2013 7:12:00 PM

Tremendously awesome write my friend! I totally agree with Rebecca's comments! Cheers

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/27/2013 12:09:00 AM

My good friend, Jack, you so kind! Who would dare...not to agree with lovely Rebecca? Thank you my countryman!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/26/2013 8:27:00 AM

Good morning, today I woke up with a beautiful sunrise and now you give a beautiful sunset. Thanks. ... Lucy

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/26/2013 8:30:00 AM

Thank you, Lucy , for your kind words! Enjoy the day!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/26/2013 6:04:00 AM

I can just visualize the sun resting within the night sky and yawning as it says goodnight, this is a gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/26/2013 6:28:00 AM

Glad you visited my friend, Russell! God bless you!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/26/2013 4:20:00 AM

beautiful images of the sunset. Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/26/2013 6:29:00 AM

Dr. Ram, your visit is always greatly appreciated! Thank you!