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Sun's Rise

When cometh the sun upon the mornings dew The birds will chirp in harmonious pure delight As it raises and casts shadow then on the earth We welcome the dawn so to let go of the night The birds will chirp in harmonious pure delight Serenading us as we share in a morning’s kiss We welcome the dawn so to let go of the night We recognize it well for its beauty and its bliss Serenading us as we share in a morning’s kiss We delight in the sounds that play for us two We recognize it well for its beauty and its bliss As we welcome each other as we so often do We delight in the sounds that play for us two While we take each other into a tight embrace As we welcome each other as we so often do I kiss you tenderly as I stare into your face While we take each other into a tight embrace The sun tilts its head, blushing from the view I kiss you tenderly as I stare into your face As the sun rises, I shall make love with you The sun tilts its head, blushing from the view As it raises and casts shadow then on the earth As the sun rises, I shall make love with you When cometh the sun upon the mornings dew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/4/2009 7:48:00 AM
Dear Michael - Congratulations on your WIN in Christie's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 3/2/2009 2:38:00 PM
Congratulation on your win in Christies contest, Michael, with this beautiful poem! Love the form! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/25/2009 11:59:00 AM
So beautiful! Warmest congrats on your win in Christie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/25/2009 11:29:00 AM
Such a lovely entry to the contest, Michael! Congratulations on being among the winning poems! ~ love , Carrie
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:27:00 AM
Michael congratulations on placing in the contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:26:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/30/2009 12:35:00 PM
Hi Michael, this is such a beautifully flowing poem, such tenderness and love shines through! Thank you for the very kind comments and inspirational thoughts you left on my poetry. 9-11 was terrible... it is nothing short of miraculous that you survived it. I'm so sorry about your brother and dad, I know that was so hard to go through. This poem sings of life to me... you have written it wonderfully and joyfully. Here's to life. :) Blessings, Amy.
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Date: 1/29/2009 3:12:00 AM
I love the warm cascsde that is this poem, just beautiful imagry and love felt, well done! Love, Kristin
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:26:00 PM
Wonderful write, Michael. Not only have I never attempted this form, but have never heard of it! You continue to amaze and inspire me. Blessings! Donna G.
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:17:00 PM
Nice pantoum, quite a difficult form but you mastered it...Raul
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Date: 1/28/2009 12:27:00 PM
Fabulous, Goodness how could you write such a complicated style of poetry. Am speechless, beautifully written full of romance and imagery. Will move onto a new style myself when I have 20 Haikus written. Déirdre
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Date: 1/28/2009 8:03:00 AM
I'm not familiar with this poetry form but you managed to pen an uplifting view in this poem. I really like the title. Nice use of imagery. Have a nice day. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/28/2009 8:03:00 AM
Valant attempt at very difficult form. I and too ignorant of the form to say much in this regard yet I would preferr (comes) to (cometh) being more forcefully in the moment yet still maintaining the antiquated feel. Lovely love poem! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/28/2009 7:42:00 AM
This poem is beautiful, as I read it, I was singing a melody, this has the makings for a song..I loved this write, always, Christy
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Date: 1/28/2009 7:28:00 AM
A talented write as always Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcme observations
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Date: 1/28/2009 7:11:00 AM
This is so lovely, Michael. Can feel the glorious sun...even though it is grey outside today! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/28/2009 7:02:00 AM
Exceptional write, Michael. Vince
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:50:00 AM
A marvelous PANTOUM, both in form and expression... tender lines and beautiful imagery. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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