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Sunrise

SUNRISE While The peaks of mountains Are wearing the crown of sunrise with grace Bellow the valleys are still struggling To escape dark night’s Embrace! ©Demetrios Trifiatis 6 January 2013

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Date: 1/12/2013 12:29:00 PM
Great imagery! It even looks rather like a mountain the way the words are shaped.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/12/2013 1:01:00 PM
Thank you! That was the idea i.e. the mountain shape.
Date: 1/6/2013 6:38:00 AM
Well written ! - Thanks for your comments and your visit to my last poem. - - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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