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Sun Kissed

Just outside my window a row of coned shaped trees bend their foolish heads for his attention. He can have his way with them........ yet with such a wily nature, he passes over them. Instead, he slowly slithers through my window while I sleep the angle of his glance makes my closed eyes flutter, and I smile........ His appearance, casts shadows on the wall, as he stares across the room at me. I feel him move over me I am sun kissed by this welcome intruder, by his warming touch, his flaming breath Dazzled by his embrace, I toss the quilt, and open myself to him He caresses so softly, warming my heart, and making me sigh... with gentle touch upon my face I bask in his love, as I lie in sweet gratitude, my sleepy state... enraptured with sweet contentment Soaking up and drunk with the solstice of his shine Outside, eucalyptus branches are jealous Impatient and longing to feel this splendor .....But, woefully,... even I....begin to feel his presence is fading As angry clouds return to steal away our moment He runs and hides! No longer do I feel the kiss.... Coolness envelopes me as darkness returns again His golden touch is gone, I am once again alone in the shadow of the gray morning light I must pull my blanket up and over me... to take away the chill Inspired by Miss Christie Moses 'The Soul of Sunshine' contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/4/2009 7:49:00 AM
Dear Carrie - Congratulations on your WIN in Christie's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 3/2/2009 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Christie's contest, Carrie! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:01:00 PM
YAY Carrie! A gorgeous write and well deserved win in Christie's contest! Warmest congrats! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:29:00 AM
Carrie congratulations on your poem placing in the contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest Carrie Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/2/2009 6:41:00 AM
This is very beautiful, Carrie. I love how the sun becomes lover and the tender feelings that are expressed. This is alovely piece, filled with your creative beauty. Good luck! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/27/2009 1:05:00 PM
Smile-"This," is my very favorite write of "Yours" and quite possibly, most of any I have ever read here dear lady!!! "Hello Priceless and Gifted and Beautiful Carrie Richards and All Your Precious Loves!!!"-Smile-I don't know why I need to do this? But I must I believe, for the unwavering record!!! Let me make something absolutely clear unto You dear, please---As long as I live-"You" shall forever remain, "Priceless To My Eyes!!!!"....cont....
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Date: 1/26/2009 3:29:00 AM
Carrie this poem is excellent - So very well written I could just feel the Sun coming in and then passing by - Great poem neighbor - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/25/2009 12:53:00 PM
Nice to see you elaborate, revel in this personification of the sun. Sweet read. Thanks for your intest in my verse. Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 1/25/2009 8:06:00 AM
Carrie, this is absolutely gorgeous. I think you could even list it as Personification. Either way, you have captured so well the golden beauty that kisses us with warmth and light. Awesome write! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/25/2009 5:49:00 AM
wonderfully written!
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Date: 1/25/2009 3:53:00 AM
Ooooo, I see you feel the same way about good old Mr. Sun as i do! lol Holy Shnickey's, that was, (O.K, I have to say it) HOT!!!! youch! Love, me
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Date: 1/24/2009 4:55:00 PM
I think this is a most wonderful poem Carrie. You made the sun come alive and I could feel him..Toss the guilt and other lines in this piece are terrific...I would say good luck but I don't think you will need it with this piece. Incredible.
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:44:00 PM
Yikes I will never feel the sun again in the same way lol. Great job Carrie. Laurie
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:13:00 PM
Carrie Very sweet sentiment I feel your rapture of love and sunlight! Wonderfu write! good luck in the contest! Love Laura :)
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