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Sun and Moon

warm heat radiates baking the soft fertile soil regeneration casting bright shadows over sphere covered earth's crust illumination the brightness of day a stark contrast to the night rays versus moon beams Phyllis Babcock

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2012 5:31:00 PM

A good contrast set, Phyllis. CAn you imagine all the contests we have had for sun and moon? Nette put up a new one on Selene, the moon goddess, just recently. WEll, it was good to see you here today. LUv, Andrea

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/17/2012 6:07:00 PM

Love it Congrats on your win

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/5/2012 5:09:00 AM

Well done, Phyllis. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 2/2/2012 2:31:00 AM

Congrats Phyllis on your win......spandan

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/31/2012 2:21:00 PM

Nice haiku, Phyllis. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/1/2012 10:23:00 AM

thank you Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2012 8:22:00 AM

Great contrast that you have presented in these descriptive Haiku...Sara

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:38:00 AM

thank you Sara- have a great day

David Williams

Date: 1/31/2012 1:04:00 AM

Phyllis congrats on your win, ..David

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:37:00 AM

thank you David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 3:59:00 PM

Congratulations to one of my favorite Soup ladies!! Good to see this one on the list and say hi to you today. LUv, Andrea

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:37:00 AM

thank you my good friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Phyllis. Love, Carol

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:36:00 AM

thanks you Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 1:27:00 PM

congrats Phyl on sweet success in my contest.. a splendid entry luv.. thankxxx..

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:36:00 AM

thank you Linda-marie you have made my day.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2012 11:16:00 AM

There's something very special about this poem, Phyllis. I think you succeeded (as Brian Strand has been suggesting we all do) in "showing" as opposed to "telling." The imagery here is magnificent and I wish you success in the contest. I'll send you a Soup mail with my email address. I'd like to know more about the progress you are making. Love, Carolyn

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:35:00 AM

thanks Carolyn- sent my email address by soup mail

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/30/2012 12:36:00 AM

Two of my favorite subjects...Sun and Moon. This is some REALLY nice work! THank you for sharing!~JSLambert

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:34:00 AM

thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2012 3:45:00 PM

There is only one word to say Phyllis:Beautiful. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:34:00 AM

thanks Anne Lise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2012 12:01:00 AM

Phyllis, always a happy and skipping like the stars at night and stones in the day... love all 3 haiku's... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:33:00 AM

thanks PD- have a great day

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/24/2012 12:16:00 PM

ohhhh....I like this. Lovely haikus !!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/31/2012 8:32:00 AM

thanks Debra