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SUMMER’S END staying cool, in the pool, where children are cruel, on a very hot day— Summer’s officially over. from submarine fool, fishy bubbling school, plenipotentiary fuel— a payload parade. when the ping-pong jewels surface - whirlpool of fleeing ridicule. afraid of riveting stool— a flotsam snicker’s bar. The worst part is the noise— that awful fartastic that destroys the floats, duckies, other toys. it lasts and lasts… it’s a spastic stinker, a ferocious clinker — it channels the sulfur pits of Turkmenistan’s door to hell. officially over, the pool in deep cover— no one hovers near the episodic rear of Summer. 9/24/2021 Fart-tastic

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Date: 9/27/2021 9:55:00 PM
This is Water-tastic! Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2021 6:49:00 AM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 9/26/2021 8:22:00 AM
I am glad summer is over. Too hot and I suffered a lot. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2021 6:50:00 AM
Wrapping you with a hug…so sorry for your suffering. xx
Date: 9/25/2021 4:13:00 AM
Witty and entertaining, dearest Kim. Much enjoyed! Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2021 6:00:00 AM
LOL…glad you enjoyed, dearest Demetrios!
Date: 9/25/2021 12:53:00 AM
That melancholic filing of Fall,Kim around the corner
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2021 6:01:00 AM
I love Fall but it seems you might not. Still it’s been 5 months since Mom’s been gone…passing into another season without her has a melancholy. God bless you, sweet friend!
Date: 9/24/2021 3:19:00 PM
A really clever one Kim. Kinda makes you glad to leave it all behind for the clean white snow. Too cute. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2021 4:15:00 PM
LOL, YES!
Date: 9/24/2021 2:20:00 PM
You write crazier stuff than me and that's quite an accomplishment!!! WOWSERS! LOL Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2021 2:28:00 PM
LOL…thanks, Happy Jack!

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