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golden grains of sand gentle waves caress our toes dreams walk on ... kiss you! Jan Allison 20th November 2014 Thanks to Demetrios for his assistance with the final line

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Robert Warlov

Date: 9/6/2023 1:53:00 PM

Just like romance to ruin a perfect scene. Pregnant with ethereal possibilities.

Michael Newman

Date: 11/25/2014 6:53:00 AM

Romance in three lines AAAAAAhh... Miken

Jan Allison
Date: 11/25/2014 11:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Miken :-) Hugs jan xxxxx

Donna Jones

Date: 11/21/2014 12:48:00 PM

Your words make me want to jump right in that picture...very nice

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2014 12:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Donna - guess we could all do with some sunshine at the moment and the hope of warmer weather:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2014 12:25:00 PM

There's something wonderful walking on warm sands, especially with a loved one. Now I know where the sand is, next > This Haiku simply warms the soul, James :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2014 12:27:00 PM

Thank you so much James I had a much simpler final line and Demetrios came up with this gem which is simply perfect:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2014 5:09:00 PM

Thanks for the visit to my page..I am sorry to be so long in responding back..Life has been a little different lately..Sara..Great collaborative work..I enjoyed reading it and enjoyed the picture..

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2014 5:10:00 PM

thanks so much Sara Demetrios will be delighted at the positive feedback since i amended the original poem:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2014 9:03:00 AM

this is very romantic and the imagery is beautiful, Jan. Soupmail

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2014 12:01:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea - I must read that link sometime!! hugs Jan x

Paul Callus

Date: 11/20/2014 8:49:00 AM

Lovely and romantic haiku, Jan. I love it! #7 hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2014 12:01:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/20/2014 8:27:00 AM

Ah, the sweet memories of summer. Love your Haiku Jan. XOXO

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2014 12:00:00 PM

Thanks as ever for your lovely comments:-) hugs Jan x

David Meade

Date: 11/20/2014 7:57:00 AM

Of course I love the haiku . . . the feel and smell of the sand and water . . . the endless possibilities of dreams . . . nicely done -- a tag team!!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2014 12:00:00 PM

Thanks David I do appreciate your comments:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/20/2014 7:40:00 AM

Wonderful haiku Jan! Superb romantic ! Perfect image for it! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2014 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Dorian - I said I wouldn't use images but I can see they are beneficial for setting a mood:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/20/2014 6:38:00 AM

Beautiful haiku.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2014 11:58:00 AM

Thanks so much Maurice:-) Hugs jan x

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/20/2014 5:22:00 AM

My dearest, Jan, your poetic talent is surpassed only by your magnanimity! You deserve the credit for this superb Haiku!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2014 5:24:00 AM

Your amendment to the final line makes the poem far more romantic - thank you so much:-) Hugs Jan xx