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Summer Heat

parched earth whining for single droplet of water - crimson sun blazing. flush of anger drive the trifling clouds to hideout - lone sun ruling sky. Fifth Place in Summer Haiku's Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/1/2020 1:33:00 AM

I always love haikus portraying the arrival of raindrops to quench the thirst of parched Earth in blazing summer. This is beautiful Jenish. Congratulations on your win :) Lots of blessings!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/1/2020 2:06:00 AM

Thank you Aditi for the delightful comment.. Have a great day!!

Funom Makama

Date: 6/29/2020 3:12:00 PM

A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/29/2020 11:35:00 PM

Thank you Funom for your kind support..

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/29/2020 9:47:00 AM

HOT! I can feel it, the lonely clouds running from the sun. Nice! Congrats on your placement.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/29/2020 11:35:00 PM

Thank you Jeanne for your kind support..

V. Deepa

Date: 6/29/2020 6:40:00 AM

Beautiful imagery sir. Loved the last line. I too can feel the rage of Sun:-) Congratulations on your placement. Keep writing and keep inspiring us. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/29/2020 11:35:00 PM

Thank you Deepa for your delightful comment..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/29/2020 2:54:00 AM

I can feel the heat Jenish, congratulations on your win. Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/29/2020 11:34:00 PM

Thank you Tom for your kind support..

Eve Roper

Date: 6/28/2020 5:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jenish, great imagery. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/29/2020 1:58:00 AM

Thank you Eve..

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/28/2020 4:16:00 PM

Jenish, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku's!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/29/2020 1:58:00 AM

Thank you Tania for that kind placement.. And thank you for bringing this wonderful contest for inspiring our pens.. Have a great day..

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/27/2020 12:34:00 PM

I can feel the blazing parched summer heat, like 'trifling clouds to hideout' - well expressed!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/29/2020 1:56:00 AM

Thank you Michelle...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2020 6:11:00 PM

I really liked the personification in this one , Jenish!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/24/2020 11:33:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.. I'm happy to hear you liked it..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/23/2020 11:16:00 PM

I love these 'parched summer writes.' I really do. (You can view the haiku I wrote for the contest). But our question might be: What will the sponsor think of such scenes and settings? … Oh, well: To thine selves, be true, Poets!! lol. Take care, Jenish. :) Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/24/2020 1:03:00 AM

lol.. Still smiling reading your words..lol..What will the sponsor think of such scenes and settings?lol... Thank you Gershon for that smiling comment..

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/23/2020 12:37:00 PM

Absolutely true! The Sun has grabbed tight the reins of heat and spurred it into scorching rays! Every refreshing breath is a blessing from God! So powerful and unique an imagery that holds a reader's attention! So pleased to read, Jenish! Best regards and blessings.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/24/2020 1:01:00 AM

Thank you Besma for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/23/2020 8:53:00 AM

Dazzling blazing sun captured in words, the drought in brevity. Kudos for this great haiku! Plz pleez do read and comment my newest piece, a prose and do also read the articles and data I have copy pasted in comment section below the poem so you will confirm the matter further.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/24/2020 1:01:00 AM

Thank you Zaynab..